The Automaton: Part 1

A series of staccato dots and dashes, shrill and sonorous in their patterned repetition, falls flatly against the worn, muddied canvas of an overstretched tent. These reverberant clacks of Morse Code emanate from the metal sounder of a telegraph machine, which lies atop the splintered, cluttered surface of a solitary wooden desk. The dim, crimson flame of a gas lantern illuminates a consortium of small tools and ink-stained papers blotted betwixt the scrawled translation of the aural code. Hunched and straining her abyssal eyes through the somnolent, wavering shadows extruding from the draped recesses of the tent, a sole engineer sits. She listens and scribbles methodically, the sinuous, raven strands of her frayed hair curling about a narrow finger on her listless right hand. As blackness pours from the stiffly uniformed back of the distracted engineer, two parallel, indented treads caked in copper silt roll beyond the flap threshold of the tent.

An automaton enters.

Painted in the pitch of obfuscating darkness, the machine, with slow, deliberate precision, trudges behind the occupied engineer and settles beside a sunken-in, cloth cot. A blue flash, effulgent in the gloom, emits with sudden intensity from a small bulb inset within its domed, metal skull.

The engineer flinches violently, her tremulous left hand instinctually grabbing for the navy cap slipping precariously from amidst the tangle of her wiry black hair. Her hat secured expeditiously with military exactness, she then grasps the lantern and turns to scout for the source of the lurid light.

The meek, red gleam of the lantern diffuses against the dulled surface of the automaton.

Pronounced in the comingling of colored suffusions, its leaden, cylindrical torso is rutted with striated scratches, and the rusted rivets lining its seams are contorted and loosened across its heavy frame.

The timorous composure of the engineer relaxes at the sight of the wearied machine as she kneels, pen and notebook now on hand, to face the automaton at the height of its stature. Her deep complexion appears ethereally wan in the sapphire gaze of the sole bulb, and the impenetrable blackness of her eyes mirrors the hollow, cavernous socket where a second bulb was once set. She leans toward a small, conical mouthpiece screwed to the automaton’s chest and begins an orated reply.

“Copy. Start transmission.”

Syncopated clicks, metallic and clangorous, vibrate from within the cavity of the automaton.

She translates:

-To Lead Telegraph Engineer (L.T.E) Berenice Turner                                11/03/1902

We are requesting your services to escort this automaton to coordinates 25˚ 33’ 0” S / 28˚ 11’ 0”E for repairs. Will signal with further instruction. Respond with haste.”

-Telegraphist Cecil Tregennis for Macluto Telautomatics, Main Station

            “Affirmed.”

The engineer rises, resting the meager weight of her frail frame against the clouded, opaque steel of the automaton’s hemispherical head. Beginning to undo the tenuous knots and splitting threads of the mis-matched buttons aligning the creases of her sun-bleached navy uniform, she momentarily stares back at the automaton. It remains unmoving. Quizzical apprehension assuaged, she proceeds to remove the formal affects of her assigned raiment until naught of it remains save prosaic cloth underclothes and her silver-trimmed, navy cap. She rests her garments on the desk and slouches into the deepening concavity of the stretched, cot fabric. The knob of the lantern is turned, and the quivering flame is stifled; in deference, the lone bulb flickers for a moment, fades gently into the expanding gloom, and finally dies.

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Pale hues of the inchoate morning scatter amongst the laden haze settling into a damp, capacious valley. A penetrating knell pierces the stillness, awakening an encampment of soldiers from the encumbrance of sheltered slumber. The assemblage emerges from their tents and disperses about the bivouac like dissipating mist amidst the rising cacophony of indistinct orders and meretricious chatter.

Standing in the periphery of the camp, the engineer squints against the incident glow of the rising sun that reflects off the dew clinging to the few, obdurate blades of heavily trodden, dying grass. The automaton trudges with imperturbable constancy behind her, its treads leaving a patterned impaction in its wake.

She turns around.

“Follow closely.”

The laminar stream of a quite breeze propagates a few ripples across the garish, silver volutes and swirls sewn into the dark blue fabric of a dignified flag. Passing armed guards and the barrel of a wagon-mounted cannon, coated in a film of pewter powder, the engineer and the automaton encroach the end of the encampment and cross into the silence of the sleeping veld beyond. As the two progress through the hacked brush and trampled path formed along the natural curve of the sunlit valley, they can barely discern the gaudy flag, still flapping proudly in the distance.

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In the topaz glare of the high-angled sun, the low-lying brush lining the advancing plains shimmer with flecks of golden radiance. Alight in the glow of the incandescent afternoon, crumbling mountaintops dotted in a pointillistic palette of smattered treetops appear to fade inexorably into the distance. Clumps of iron-dense silt stick to the patched leather sides of her high-laced boots as the engineer marches with a strident pace atop the amenable ground. Bellows of russet grit blown by temperate gusts brush against the twisted rivets and rusted joints of the automaton’s two, bent, arm-like appendages.

It follows at her heels.

Reflected through the prismatic cloud of vaporous air, a sudden gleam from the sole bulb tinges the surrounding area in a radial profusion of cerulean light.

The engineer kneels before the automaton, her wiry fingers searching the depths of a muddied knapsack she had been carrying for her notebook and pen.

“Copy. Start transmission.”

She translates:

“Refrain from opening the internal cavity and disturbing its delicate mechanisms. Adjustments to be made only if communication functions have ceased.”

A questioning intensity flares momentarily in her charcoal eyes, and the contortion of uncertainty lining her appearance is exaggerated in its reflection in the fragile, rounded glass of the automaton’s lone bulb. She blinks away her perambulating thoughts and raises, turning her back to the automaton and resuming her unwavering persistence in their commanded journey.

It follows in her wake.

***

Purple hues of the crepuscular sky are fretted with ruby fires as the sun sinks with quiet lassitude beneath the horizon. In the stillness of the encroaching night, flickering flames chew euphoniously upon the withered and splintered sticks that lie crackling in a pile before the taut, knotted laces of the engineer’s high boots. She scoops sloughing contents of a tin can between her parted, dry lips, while the automaton rests at her side, the outline of its metallic frame silhouetted by the resplendence of the burning embers.

A stark sound interrupts their silent repose.

Without pause or hesitancy, the familiar echoing clangor of Morse Code rattles from the automaton, and the engineer, in short reply, clamors for her concealed notebook and pen.

 “Wait, hold on! …Mr. Tregennis, please re-transmit your previous message.”

The clash of the internal iron armature ceases, and the engineer waits in prepared anticipation of its resumption. The noise refuses to repeat.

 “Damn it.” She mulls restlessly, eyes closed, the toe of her left boot striking the compacted earth beneath it out of mindless agitation. “D... Diverting…” Sequences of dots and dashes begin to reconstruct from her memory, and she parses each resonant, hollow sound, translating the series of legato and staccato notes until a single message precipitates.

“‘Diverting our course five kilometers west will yield an intersection with a mining city. We can find temporary respite there.’”

Incredulous, the engineer pauses, the shallow creases of her sharp lineaments contorting in a contradictory expression of skepticism and certainty.

 “No, that’s… far too informal. Though accurate, I’m fairly sure…”

Looking up from under the lowered bridge of her cap, her furrowed visage greets its warped, blurred equal staring back from the curved anterior plates of the automaton. She relinquishes her gaze, shakes off her consternation, and reaches for her abandoned tin can.

Wavering ribbons of smoke curl and intermingle as they trace upwards from the amber fires, rising in languid columns until the ashen plumes are lost amongst the enveloping turbidity of low-lying clouds.

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A shrill exhalated sigh from a passing train sends screeching birds scattering into the thin layer of stratus clouds hanging deep into the leaden firmament. From a jagged precipice of tumbled, jutting stones, the engineer and the automaton visually follow the jettisoned puffs of coal-fired steam as they escape from the clinging film of fog that suffuse the sifting fields in the distance. Emergent from the darkening, somber pall of haze beneath, a shrouded city of blackened, broken plaster is partially entombed in the piles of maroon soil displaced by heavy, craterous indentations slammed against the streets and lined buildings. From afar, the engineer notices heavy armaments encircling the remains of the city’s walls that rise like headstones from the settled dust.

A clash of ringing Code pierces her errant, desultory thoughts. Steadying her cap against the force of her timorous recoiling, she twists her frame uncomfortably to face the automaton.

She translates aloud:

 “Accessibility of nearby quarries has not been compromised in spite of recent tribulations in their propinquity.”

In a brazen masking of sudden trepidation, she responds with sardonic flippancy, “Mind explaining how you knew what I was looking at, Mr. Tregennis?”

Silence is the only response she receives.

“Never mind.”

The engineer crosses her arms into the stiffened folds of her uniform, maintaining a stance of resolution in a facsimile display of her former composure. In a barely perceptible, rhetorical utterance, she retorts, “I hadn’t realized it was such a priority for us to protect these mines specifically.”

“Ionium’s military utility has been recognized since-”

“So they found it here, too. I see…” An inscrutable expression is cast across the growing pallidity of her sunken cheeks, as the black depths of her eyes glide with crawling viscosity along the rail line like thick, poured oil.

The train’s breaks sputter and hiss as the weighted iron wheels scrape against the flecks of rust flaking off the tracks, and it stops, slowly, resentfully, with a final, deafening whine.

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Quivering limply as its hangs in the stagnant, damp air, a single flag, pearlescent with threads of silver and navy, rises in proud ostentation above the plaintive solemnity of the city lying beneath. A dull electrical fizzle accompanies the dimming of wired filaments encased in the cracked glass domes that surmount the few functional streetlamps. Refuse piles of fractured bricks and soot-smothered panes of shattered window glass clog the arterial pathways like the corpuscular globules of an inflicted malady. Bombardments of punctured holes emboss the tumbled fragments of the surviving brick facades, and the metallic remains of exploded shell casings rest, seeping, into the welcoming mud of their earthen graves.

Gruff, acetic soldiers grunt a solitary word of greeting to the engineer from atop the saddled backs of horses that plod, listless, at the sodden ground. She tugs at the brim of her cap in reply, and the guards glare, with surprise and scrutiny, at the mechanical being treading in servitude behind.

The clinging of the sounder, intrusive and sonorous, breaks the contemplative silence.

“I advise that we depart at your earliest convenience tomorrow morning. Delays will needlessly protract our journey.”

“Of course. We-…We.”

She stops. A single, emergent thought is struck in a flicker of incendiary ferocity, and it consumes her mind, growing, becoming more puissant and dominant and searing as the seconds pass until a fretful realization is illuminated through the obfuscation of doubt.

“I-I need to find a Telegraph Office. Wait here.”

The automaton obeys.

***

Spatulate droplets of turbulent rain pour from the dense accumulation of cumulus clouds gathering overhead. The passing inhabitants, wearied, with thin, translucent skin stretched across bulging bones, watch, as they scramble to shelter, the automaton stationed motionless in the unremitting storm.

Through the torrential mire of sloshing grime and flooding waves of rotting effluent, the engineer returns. Her face is sheen from an indistinguishable stippling of sweat and rain, and her blushed lineaments appear painted in a stroke of preternatural darkness that follows every angular edge, every hollow curve, every prematurely sunken line.

“Come with me. Now.”

It follows her out of the rain, where they convene, face to front, under an ornate steel balcony that stands incongruous, with its intact structure and spiraling ornamentation, against the crumbling city in the background. She opens her slack, drenched coat and removes a concealed device, which almost slips through her slick, damp fingers as she fidgets with tremulous anticipation.

She holds out her scavenged components before the automaton.

An iron bar rests in her cupped, narrow palms, wrapped in coils of fabric-coated copper wire and secured to a diminutive, voltaic cell in a crude circuit.

Her voice is shaken and strained, almost inaudible above the arrhythmic patterns of percussive rain and cymbal-thrashing thunder. “This is ludicrous, truly, but I-I need to know. It’s best to test these things empirically, so…If I’m not allowed to adjust this automaton’s inductance internally, perhaps temporary interference is permissible instead?”

Without waiting for its aural crash of coded assent, she kneels and presses the electromagnet gently with the sallow pads of her fingertips against the center of the automaton’s cylindrical chest. “In conjunction with the electromagnetic interference provided by the storm, this should compound the severance to the main station and Mr. Tregennis,” She reasons aloud, wiping a residual droplet of corroding rain as it drips down the front of the automaton.

“So, if I command an answer and no one, as expected, complies, then I was speaking directly to Mr. Tregennis this entire time. Alternatively, if I get a response, that means…” A meek rasp of stunted breath shudders her body as it escapes her shaking lips. “No. Automata can’t. The others couldn’t…”

The engineer falters.

Then, with brave impetuosity, she yells, “Where are we, right now? I command you to answer!”

Silence pervades. Her eyes burn with the black ferocity of struck flint. The automaton is still.

The metal armature falls.

A ringing thud, one after another, sounds.

“We are in the telegraph office of Kimasmith City, coordinates approximately 28° 33' 34" S / 29° 46' 50E”

She recoils, seizing in a galvanic shock of paralytic fear coursing through her wiry stature. A chill of cold realization wracks a shiver down her frozen frame, and she attempts to speak, the words crystalizing and transfixing her lower jaw in a position unnaturally agape.

“I-I was wrong, Mr. Tregennis s-somehow received it…T-This can’t prove…”

“A sample size of one is insufficient datum to formulate a defensible theory. However, in this instance, your hypothesis is correct.”

Tiny Poetry

Background: Beginning sometime in 2012 during my sophomore year of college, I started to contribute poetry, illustrations, and short narratives to the open-source production company run by Joseph Gordon-Levitt entitled HitRecord. The site’s intention was to encourage collaboration between creators from all facets and variabilities of artistic fields. One continual effort called “tiny stories” encouraged writers to devise compelling and moving poems while implementing as few words as possible— an endeavor to find complexity in simplicity. Knowing my verbosity, I found this challenge to be particularly interesting and a test of my capabilities. The results are presented below. The final poem, “Marionette”, inspired an illustrator who produced an animated image, which was then promoted by Joe and subsequently used as the visual representation emblematic of HitRecord’s Sundance 2012 show titled “Independence”.

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Blank Canvas

The girl was a blank canvas

allowing others to color her world

until one day when she erased the graffiti

and painted on a new face to be unfurled

 

Still Waiting

I sat waiting for you at the intersection of maturity and responsibility

But you never arrived

 

Creativity

Reality limits possibilities

 Art creates them

 

The Sand King

Grain by grain his empire dissolved...

 

Strangers

In the future, we will be friends,

we will be happy, and

we will be lovers without regret,

but for now, we are just two strangers; two people who haven't met

 

The Edge

I stand at the edge of reality and the sea of dreams,

A place where nothing is as it seems

Tired of the world in which I reside,

I step off the cliff and tumble into the tide

 

The Marionette

 I was a marionette dangling from a string,

forced to act, to dance, to do just about anything.

One day I decided to end the abuse,

so I found some scissors and I cut myself loose

Reciprocity in Relationships

It is often stated from a position of retrospective sagacity that effective communication is integral to the strength and salubriousness of a relationship. Though there is apparent veracity to the necessity of clearly articulating values, needs, boundaries, problems, etc., there exists something even more foundational to the initial manifestation and potential fecundity of a newly established relationship—reciprocity. Reciprocity prognosticates the future of a pair, decides the trajectory of their relations, and, without the experience of equality between the two, dictates that nothing can proceed any further. Essentially, when two people spend time together, there exists an objective reality simultaneously experienced, however, the perception, interpretation, and overall impression of events can be profoundly dissonant. In unfortunate, inequitable cases, the clangorous pangs of incipient affection are met with the inauspicious knell of silent insouciance. This incongruity in personal investment and interest in the relationship can manifest quite painfully for both individuals; for the one who feels less, it becomes sorrowful to be unable to provide the attention and emotion that they know the other desires. To the other, it is inordinately devastating to bear the prodigious weight of care and affection with the desperate cognizance that it cannot be matched. The lack of reciprocity therefore poisons possibility and forms an insuperable barrier to the solidification of a relationship that transcends the bounds of personal control or direction. Thus, both partners experience heartache from failed expectations and wasted efforts. It truly is a beautiful rarity when perfect reciprocity exists.

Benedict's Letters

History: Originally conceptualized as the character most integral to the instigation of numerous significant events which predicate the start of the full-length novel (PART 2- The Novel Chapter 1), Benedict was intended to be considerably anatomized through these three letters he left behind. As Benedict had been presumed dead twenty years prior to the initiation of the narrative, the novel’s protagonist, who encounters the old correspondences, experiences one side of a revelatory and intimate conversation that elucidates Benedict’s personality and past tribulations. Throughout the remainder of the still-unfinished novel, I planned to sporadically contribute to the further development of Benedict’s character and mentality through the retrospective accounts and reminiscences his past acquaintances would provide.

Background: One of the most paramount influences on the specific vernacular and legato cadence which categorize my particular writing style is unequivocally Edgar Allan Poe. I was profoundly affected by the aberrant, oxymoronic nature inherent to his writing, whereby his eloquent and mellifluous language was often employed to beautifully describe unconscionable acts of brutality or the gruesome, progressive corruption of the human psyche. When approaching these letters and the sort of subject matter I desired to depict, the atmospheric, morose density of Poe’s words seemed to be extremely well-suited to this scenario, leading me to irreverently challenge myself to emulate Poe for this short segment of my novel. Though I can’t profess to have achieved accuracy (I didn’t), this self-imposed test was still entertaining to attempt!

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Dearest Antares, (June 1874)

I hope this letter serves as the warmest of welcomes awaiting your formal arrival amongst the prodigious halls of the palace. I must admit, though we witnessed the extensive preparations which preceded your move to the capital, it has, only now upon the recognition of its reality and the submergence into the silence left by your absence, become inescapably apparent that we are regrettably ill-equipped to contend with so substantial and immediate a change as this. The jocularity surrounding our final moments together still resonates soundlessly within these walls, and despite the innate impossibility I still almost expect the visage of my greatest friend, my goddaughter, and my son to greet me should I be so inclined to unlatch the front door. As difficult as this transition has been for me, it is truly trivial in comparison to the execrable pain foisted upon poor Josephine. I have found that the oft curative nature of the passage of time has yet to stymie the fluidity with which the heavy tears roll down her soft cheeks. I know she does still assent to the decision that we made regarding Edwin; however, she will not forgo ascribing blame on herself for being the progenitor of its unfortunate necessity. I would be much obliged if you could include some additional words of comfort to her in your response, as mine alone have been surely inefficacious in allaying these terrible cogitations of hers. I fear that, in her weakened state, the stress of the separation from our son may only prove to exacerbate her symptoms. The doctors assure me of her current stability, and I have every expectation that the end of this summer will coincide with the restoration of her former health and vitality if all proceeds as anticipated with the treatment. Perhaps continuous reminders that Edwin’s return home will swiftly succeed the cessation of her illness can encourage a hastened recovery. I can already sense your incredulity at my expression of what must be an unscientific principle, and I presume my assumptions will be affirmed upon the receipt of your reply.

No matter the duration of Edwin’s residence with you and Cinna, I cannot effectively articulate my gratefulness for the devotion and love you have demonstrated for our family. I am resolutely certain that the capacious corridors of a palace are far more suitable to the adventurous, puerile whims of children than the shabby, narrow rooms of our apartments, and Edwin, most assuredly, will flourish there beside his best friend. Josephine and I are aware of his initial response to the departure, as we heard his tearful wails trailing behind from our open window, though I have hope that, like his mother, he will find the dissolution of his sorrows to accompany the gradual passage of time. Additionally, the malleability of the young mind will prevent the pain of this moment from being irrevocably riveted into his memory. In that knowledge, I must find solace.

Remind him frequently of our affections for him.

-Benedict

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Antares, (November 1874)

Forgive me for the explicit nature of the following recount, I unfortunately feel it is a necessity which may allow for some semblance of justification for my actions. You are cognizant of the wretched lowness of my character, yet I do not want your pity nor your sympathy, instead, I only ask that in reading my words, you can refrain from the most malicious of judgement. Of my love for her you cannot doubt, even as the categorical verbosity of my writing unexpectedly fails me and I am consigned to merely express this love in such base terms as “profound” and “ineffable”. As I have previously expressed in my letters, the degradation of her health has proceeded unimpeded by our innumerable attempts at amelioration; however, as of recently, Josephine has declined precipitously. If I am to be honest with you, and if I am to be honest with myself, the physical manifestations of this change disturbed me terribly. I witnessed, with insurmountable despondency, the warm blush that gently caressed the soft curves of her cherubic features gradually sallow, as her rounded cheeks hollowed into sunken cavities. The beautiful, affable vitality once captured in the luster of her expressive green eyes faded, supplanted by a cloudy film falling like a veil across fixed, lifeless pupils. Her luscious, smiling lips thinned and curled, and their perpetual part laid bare teeth that were stained and smelled of stagnant blood. She would turn her fetid breath toward my ear and whisper in a cracking, feeble voice as I held tightly to her trembling hands, “Don’t leave me”. Every evening as I relaxed in an armchair beside our bed, I would be inexorably haunted by the phantasmagoric specter of her cadaverous appearance that seemed to arise from amongst the silent shadows of the lonely apartment. Sleep soon forewent its nightly visitation. You must understand how the pernicious corrosivity of the contemplation of her decaying form ate away at my mind. I made my decision, after weeks of agonizing perseveration, to leave her well-being entirely in the hands of her capable attendants. At my exhortation, they send messages divulging her status at the end of each week. She asks for me often, as I am told. As much as I desperately long to be by her side, I cannot bring myself to look upon her for the fear of tarnishing the integrity of the remaining memories I have of her at the peak of vivaciousness.

Excoriate me for my lack of mettle, and here you will find no objection. 

I have found the dissipation of this darkness that surrounds me to have its only derivation from reminiscing upon the comfort of your visage and this presence of you I feel elicited from the tender words of consolation you offer, despite its unfortunate lack of both physicality and tangibility. Though I must be frank with you, I regard the growing latency of your replies with great sorrow and trepidation; I hope I can attribute the infrequency of your letters to the accumulating responsibilities preceding the upcoming coronation and not from any declination in affection for me born from our continued separation. I do not wish these previous statements of mine to be perceived of as some sort of injunction, but suffice it to say that your letters and my work are the two sole sources of happiness I have left in this world.

It has brought us both comfort to hear that Edwin’s acclimation to the regimented daily proceedings of the palace has progressed with greater rapidity than anticipated. Perhaps, in a few months’ time, you will finally find him able to sleep uninterruptedly without those punctuated, violent fits.

-Benedict

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Antares, (June 1875)

She is gone. We are to convey her body to the charnel on Sunday morn after these two agonizing days of observance have past. Fortune, it seems, has never been more to me than an obsequious, combative foe, of which I am now immutably certain, given the untimely day that Death has decided to make my wife his acquaintance. Though news of recent events has mostly eluded me, I am cognizant that the date of your coronation is officially set for this Monday. I fully understand the consequent implications, and how the possibility of your presence at her funeral is compromised. It would be indubitably selfish, and frankly untenable, for me to presume that the festivities could be postponed on my account alone and, resultantly, I refuse to give credence to these thoughts or submit them for your potential rumination. However, at the very least, Antares, please, with all the love that you feel in your heart for me, try to be at my side in attendance of her burial. Upon perusal of the local train schedule for this upcoming Sunday, I have ascertained that an afternoon departure should coincide with an arrival back at the capital in the early evening; would this be sufficient to afford you time to prepare for the ceremony on the succeeding day? It is my most sincere hope that the caprices of fate will allow this to be an acceptable arrangement, as I am truly in desperate need of the attainment of some modicum of alleviation of my sorrows.

In all the sound and fury of the past few hours, the suppressive silence welcoming my return to solitude has unexpectedly conjured the most vivid recollection of that dismal afternoon when we bade our final farewells to Eliza, while newborn Cinna writhed agitatedly in my arms and shrieked as clangorously as her little lungs would permit. As evidently disparate as our current trajectories in life are—I am sure you will not interpret my saying so as a demonstration of jealousy, as you know this to be innately incongruous with my disposition—it seems we have still managed to experience commonality in the nature of our grief.

Though I am anxiously awaiting your reply, it should be known that, regardless of its contents, I assure you my affections for you will not waver.

For now and always, your greatest friend,

-Benedict

 

PART 1- The Video Game

History: Though I can’t recall the specific circumstances surrounding the inception of the initial, foundational concept, the intensity of my compulsion to work on and bring to fruition my nascent design ideas was, for years, unwavering. Beginning in early 2015, I drafted pages of elementary puzzles and artwork that I eventually attempted to translate into an executable game program with basic sprite animations. However, the constant impediments and frustrations derived from my limited capabilities proved untenable, as did the overall scale of the project and my inextricable desire to manifest the game precisely in the idealized form I had envisioned. Out of my own sense of pertinacity and refusal to abandon a narrative that had been so unequivocally inspirational to me, I decided to salvage the needlessly descriptive, thirty-thousand-word script and adapt its scraps into a full-length novel (see PART 2: Novel Chapter 1).

Though the remnants of this entire script in its original format have been saved, I’ll constrain this post to include a few sections that are sufficient to establish the general tone and structure of this work.

Background: Set during the latter half of the nineteenth century in a fictional universe, this sci-fi fantasy, puzzle-platformer was designed to incorporate the fundamental principle of “screen-wrapping” as a controllable mechanic to conduct the player through the various gameplay stages. An intricate narrative was to be interlaced between four primary levels and their respective bosses, with the player returning to an expansive, Victorian-inspired city after each mission had been completed. This city and its Non-playable characters were dynamic, altering in accordance with the passage of time and the propagating consequences of an ongoing, ever-encroaching armed conflict (based on the Franco-Prussian War and the Siege of Paris). I planned to conclude the game with a bit of a considerable reveal concerning the protagonist, Rigel, that, to be succinct, was weirdly similar to the ending twist of Jordan Peele’s “Us”.

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Rigel ascends the ladder and appears at the right side of an open, lonely room. Indented into the room’s gray-bricked back wall, an imposing clock face is alighted in the pale emanation gently diffused from the emerging morning sun. A slanted and elongated image of the clock’s face is silently lain across the wooden floorboards by the refracted light of the rising sun, terminating just before the top of the ladder and the scuffed, black shoes upon Rigel’s feet. Undisturbed and accumulating dust at the center of the room, a mechanism comprised of an aggregation of small gears, pistons, and wires is elevated on a solid wood platform. A gear box, interconnected to the complicated workings of the machinery stationed beneath it, projects four thin metal shafts from each of its four sides. One rod attaches to the center of the clock face positioned focally against the back wall, while the other three are implicitly fastened to clock faces not visible in frame. Such components should have, as in times since passed, interminably driven the fluid, incremental movements of the clocks’ metal hands. Instead, the tower perpetually wears upon its faces the precise hour and minute which brought about the sudden cessation of its rhythmic, mechanical heartbeat. As Rigel cautiously moves towards the dormant machine, his eyes are uninterruptedly drawn to the interlocked, splintering beams of the rafters overhead. From the dispersed shadows that shroud the sharp angles of the high, vaulted ceiling, the second boss of the game emerges. The fight concludes once again with the destructive deactivation of the boss and the release of a single mirror shard, which now gently rests upon the shallow, brick ledge surrounding the clock’s face. Rigel’s resolute approach to the shard gradually stains his body in a familiar red-orange hue that is captured and reflected in his eyes the moment his left hand finally makes contact. Fade out.

Another first-person lore cutscene begins.

The screen slowly fades into an image of a leather-bound notebook open to a page covered in exceptionally detailed illustrations and mechanical drawings outlining the design and operation of a toy music box. The handwriting slants capriciously, making it almost entirely illegible, and the page itself is lightly crumpled and sporadically discolored from many unfortunate encounters with both food and drink. The book is steadied and propped up against two thin thighs that bend upon their prominent knee caps in the foreground of the frame, while a clock face presents a view of the dull, gray western sky just a few paces away. A small gas lantern sits calmly beside the man on the wooden floorboards, its low-burning flames somnolently wavering as they slowly shrink and die. Continuous, sonorous whirring sounds elicited from operating machinery pervade the otherwise still, lonely room. As the man progresses in making contributions to his work, heavy footfalls and reserved voices reverberate discernably from below. The notebook is hurriedly closed and the man shyly peeks around to the left. His pale, boney hands quietly grasp the right edge of the solid wood platform he had been resting against as a stout man dressed in a top-hat and thick overcoat finishes his ascension of a nearby ladder. The new gentleman removes his hat and moves hesitantly toward the tower’s eastern face, his obscured front illuminated by a circle of light thrown across the floor by the rising sun. A few moments of uninterrupted silence pass before a second gentleman appears at the top of the ladder. Though his back is mostly turned and his features are partially blanketed in shadow, his gaunt, haggard appearance and slightly rounded and burdened shoulders are undeniably perceptible. His hands delicately cradle a bouquet of flowers against his midsection. He, too, removes his hat as he [laboriously] and painfully makes his way toward the brightly shining clock face. Not a word is uttered between the two, and they stand there, unmoving, looking out at the view of the city and countryside beyond. Finally, the shorter gentleman places a reassuring hand upon the other’s right shoulder and turns in the direction of the ladder. In response, the humble observer anxiously conceals himself once more behind the wooden platform. His breathing eventually slows and regains its normality as the sound of footsteps pressing against the creaking, wooden rungs of the ladder is heard. Carefully, the man once again peers out from behind his cover to venture a glance at the remaining gentleman. In his perceived solitude, the gentleman allows his reserved, unemotional composure to soften, and his head bows deeply into his chest while shallow gasps violently tremble his frail frame. After some time has passed in this manner, he manages to bring a thin, shaking hand up to his face to remove the evidence of his sorrow before replacing the top hat upon his head. He takes a few uncertain steps toward the ladder and hesitates just as he reaches the center of the circular beam of light emanating from the clock face. His upper body slightly turns back around as his eyes distractedly and aimlessly scan the secluded little room one final time. From this position, the warm gleam of the morning sun clearly illuminates the gentleman’s angular features. Visible just beneath the broad brim of a smooth top hat, an untamed mess of light brown hair falls gently before a deeply etched, creased brow. Protruding bags stained a dark purple underlie tired, reddened eyes, and dry, thin lips quiver almost imperceptibly. He shuts his eyes tightly for a moment and allows a heavy sigh to forcibly escape from his heaving chest, which seems to calm his shaken demeanor considerably. Conviction born of despondent resignation suddenly consumes him and he steadily turns toward the ladder, casting his face once more into the darkness of his own shadow. Consequently, the toymaker again retreats to his hiding place as his view of the tower begins to blur from the emergence and accumulation of empathetic tears. Echoing from behind his left shoulder, an audible whine of aged wood from underneath the weight of descending footballs is discerned. The toymaker is alone with the dull hum of the clockwork once more. For the final time he turns toward the clock face, his vision still compromised, as the screen occasionally flashes black in an emulation of the act of blinking. With every step, the distorted splotches gradually sharpen in resolution and the room’s features become more distinguishable and defined. The image finally regains its former clarity just as the toymaker passes through the soft veil of emitted sunlight and finds himself before the brick ledge surrounding the clock face. Looking down, he perceives a humble bouquet placed lovingly upon the warmed, chipped bricks as light settles delicately against the gentle curves of its red petals and the creased folds of the thin fabric embracing its stems. The toymaker reaches forward and caresses a lone petal with a single, trembling finger. His eyes carefully raise and he stares introspectively out the circular window at the scenery beyond the tower. Pale sunrise is emerging over the peaks of the mountains in the distance, gradually dispelling the heavy, obstinate shadows which lay across the dying trees and the slowly wakening city nestled in the valley below. Through the slight opacity of the glass’s surface, the toymaker spots two figures emerging from the tower and heading off in different directions down the intersecting, cobblestoned streets of the quiet, dormant city. He meticulously follows the movements of the taller man until the gentleman enters a simple corner residence and disappears. Fade out.

Fade in to a familiar view of a cluttered desk displaying multitudinous pieces of fabric, strings, gears, and bits of wood all alighted under the dim, red-orange glow of a resting gas lantern. Partially hidden beside discarded scraps of colorful toy components, an unadorned wooden box sits beneath pages of music box plans that were hastily tacked into the smooth mortar between the faded bricks of the workshop’s wall. Nimble fingers appear in the foreground and swiftly work towards stitching decorated sections of cloth together. The left hand eventually lowers in a demonstration of the completion of its task while the right-hand grabs and twists a metal valve attached to the side of the lantern. Gas ceases to course through its glass chamber and, subsequently, the flames it harbors are slowly stifled until they suddenly and unceremoniously die with a final desperate breath. Fade out.

Positioned in the exact location in frame where the lantern once sat, a lifeless gas streetlight partially fades into view. Its base is rigidly anchored into an accumulating film of hardened, glistening ice, and the view of the quiet street diminishing into the distance is indistinct and heavily shadowed from the darkness of the not yet completely faded-in screen. Standing beneath the light, a middle-aged man wearing a messily patched brown jacket and frayed, woolen gloves with large holes torn into the fingers carries a long, metal pole. At its end, a stout wick maintains a tiny pilot flame which is brought beneath the lantern’s hood and touched against a thin, continuous jet of gas softly whistling as it streams from a flute at the lamp’s center. Narrow flames ignite and burn hotly within the glass lamp, melting away the few flecks of snow and ice which had just begun to cling to its surface. The remainder of the scene dimly fades into view. The newly illuminated city street behind the lamplighter is mostly empty, and the red-bricked buildings which line its sides are enveloped in a deep gray haze interspersed with flurries tossed about capriciously by blustery, freezing winds. Bleary, yellow circles of light thrown from streetlamps in the distance barely punctuate the dense, heavily laden murkiness of the early winter’s evening. The toymaker braces himself against the wind and presses forward down the cobblestoned street, his determination unimpeded by the severity of the storm surrounding him. He trudges arduously down the road, his steps encumbered and deliberate in deference to the slick, shimmering ice that has encrusted across the surface and into the rugged grooves of the stones lying beneath his feet. A quaint residence emerges distinctly from the pervading fog in front of him, resting at a corner formed by the bisection of the main road by a narrow, unlit passageway. As he perseveres in his advancement towards the stoop leading up to the building’s doorway, he suddenly becomes cognizant of an oddly tepid breeze brushing past the right side of his body. Squinting through the barrage of snow and chilling gales that assault his vision, the toymaker notices that he has found himself within the confines of a diffusion of red-orange light spilling out from a paned, rectangular window just a few feet to his right. He carefully steps into an embankment of snow piled up against the building’s wall and peers into the window, which has been stuck slightly ajar by a discernable cant in its bottom edge. The living room appearing beyond the glass is plain, and its furnishings without ornamentation or meretricious decoration, and yet, it emanates an indubitable air of hospitality and comfort. Featured prominently against a back wall covered in faded, lightly curling navy-blue wallpaper, a lit fireplace is framed with a simple, oaken molding and mantelpiece. Glowing embers and dying flames meekly quiver and crackle as they exhaustedly consume the charred remnants of a log resting against the fireplace’s blackened, brick interior. A floral-patterned, upholstered armchair is positioned at an angle with its back to the exposed window and its obscured front facing the faltering fire. A slender forearm peeks out shyly from the feathered seam of a worn dressing gown as it sinks deeply into the right arm of the cushioned chair, its hand slowly losing its grasp on the binding of a still-open tome. Beside the chair, a cigar languishes in a tray amongst its scattered ashes, sending up wavering ribbons of smoke that curl and expand as they dissipate into the warm, stagnant air. This view inside the quaint apartment rapidly grows unfocused and distorted as the toymaker pushes his body away from the broken window with the force of his right hand against the glass’s surface. His exposed right extremity, throbbing and chafed from the unremitting gusts of freezing air, is stained an almost ethereally vibrant red-orange hue in the flickering light streaming from the window. A moment of brief hesitation passes before the toymaker’s attentions are turned to the amorphous object covered in a sheet that he protectively holds under the crook of his left arm. Delicately, he lays the package upon a brick ledge underlying the building’s window and raps loudly against the glass. He then turns away, hastily, from the emanating heat escaping from the slanted opening and tightly secures his overcoat across his chest. As he ventures into the stifling, deep gray cloudiness that has settled heavily between the austere, imposing rows of silent tenements, he manages to steal a final glance back in the direction of the window. A billowing wind brushes past the nestled bundle he left behind, rippling and flapping the loose edges of its fabric bindings until the object underneath is partially exposed. It is, quite discernably, a toy replica of the clock tower boss Rigel recently defeated. Fade out.

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A light frost clings to the browning leaves that congregate at each summit while the vibrant red and golden hues of fall retain their spectacular resilience at lower elevations. A rail line escapes from the city and the overbearing mountains behind it, though currently no trains venture to travel along its track. On the leftmost border of the city limits, shallow ponds of mossy green punctuate the otherwise uninterrupted fields of coarse, wild grass. The crepuscular sky behind the mountains is painted in deep blue strokes which gradually blend into a coalescence of warm, yellow and orange tones spilled across the edges of the visible sky by the setting sun. Fade Out.

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Gray cobblestones lie underfoot which welcome the protrusion of thin blades of wild grass in the spaces in between. In the distance, a grouping of dilapidated brick homes sends up lazy puffs of smoke and soot from blackened, stout chimneys. The sky is dark and rain pours unceasingly in heavy streams tinted a deep gray from diluted ash. The indistinct forms of individuals move at a fair pace across the screen in a murky, shadowy blur. Distinguishable and prominent amongst the other figures, a female child in a navy-blue coat slowly heads from the outskirts of town near the factory’s entrance toward a lonely brick building. The sound of feet splashing through puddles accompanies the camera’s pursuit of the girl as she reaches the building and opens its door, cheeks and eyes noticeably red and flush from continued hysterics.

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Jasper and his friend: Jasper settles upon a stool, his gangly body hunched over the bar and his protruding nose dangling just above a glass half-filled with a discolored liquid that he lazily swirls about. The sound of the parlor doors being swung open is heard, and a corpulent gentleman with neatly combed, thin black hair steps forward and glances, unassured, around the hazy room. His uncertainty is immediately dispelled when he spots Jasper, and, gradually, during his approach of the man, an unrestrained smile stretches across his full lips and inflates his reddened, rounded cheeks. He laughs dryly as he carefully lowers himself into the wooden stool beside Jasper. “I had heard whispers about an infamous arsehole practically residing at the parlor’s bar. Somehow I knew they were referring to you.” He claps his hand congenially against his friend’s back. “It’s been too long, Jasper. Your landlady said you’re rarely ever at home. Makes it difficult to contact you, you know.”

Jasper fixates his narrow eyes upon his friend and glares at him with sudden hostility. With a sneer, he takes a dramatic, obnoxious swig of his drink before answering. “My hours at the factory are getting longer. Forgive me for trying to relax during my free time.”

“You misunderstand, I don’t intend to lecture you. I came here to give you this.” The gentleman slides a folded piece of paper across the bar’s surface towards Jasper, who snatches it hastily and stuffs it into the interior pocket of his tattered, tweed jacket. “I, um, I’ve signed up for the army.” Jasper raises a single eyebrow and delivers a punctuated, condescending snort. “Ah, there’s that judgmental gaze I’ve missed so much. Anyways, I’m not particularly articulate, but I think I put my thoughts quite well in that.” He makes a subtle motion in the direction of the hidden pocket. Clearing his throat, the man hesitantly lifts himself from the stool and looks expectantly at Jasper for a moment before awkwardly turning away with frustrated resignation. “So…farewell, for now.”

“…No. Sit. Have a drink with me, first.”

The gentleman obliges.

 

PART 2- The Novel Chapter 1

History: In acknowledgement of the true scope and difficulty involved in meticulously conducting every constituent aspect of a video game by myself, I erroneously assumed that confining my ideas to an entirely textual medium would be decidedly more feasible as a sole venture. I disassembled the skeletal framework of the video game plot and, as the narrative was expanded and fleshed out, I became fixated on grounding the fantastical elements with a basis on the scientific and technological discoveries made during the turn of the twentieth century in the fields of telecommunication, electromagnetic radiation, and radioactivity. Desirous of entrenching my version of science fiction within an assiduously defined set of constraints which precisely delineated the operation, practicality, and consequent applicability of a new element and its associated empirical phenomena, I filled white boards with invented formulas and graphs of step-wise functions to detail the behaviors witnessed and harnessed by the characters in this universe. Additionally, I obsessively planned the interwoven arcs of each individual and attempted to ensure that their development would remain properly paced and logically consistent throughout the entire duration of the overly-complex narrative. Within a year or so, I ended up with over one-hundred thousand words of notes.

Concerning the book itself, this single, opening chapter represents all that I managed to actually accomplish.

***

A proud, navy flag, emblazoned with intricate volute designs stitched from a garish, silver fabric, somnolently undulates in the gentle gust of a dying breeze. A polished wooden pole is tightly fastened to a single edge of the rippling flag and, unperturbed by the tepid wind, remains unwavering, staunchly affixed to the ground amongst a gathered pile of crumbling rubble and broken shards of ceramic roof shingles. Journeying defiantly past the tethered flag, an abandoned thoroughfare, comprised of compacted gravel and saturated clumps of rust-colored mud, is laden with deep impressions of overlapping, sunken footfalls that are disparate and inharmonious with respect to both direction and stride. Innumerable holes of varying diameter and depth punctuate a low, stone wall that borders the quiet path, staining its cracking surface with a thin dusting of leaden powder. Bound along its perimeter by the chipped wall, an unoccupied, venerable residence, once a testament to the hospitable grandeur exemplifying prestigious, old country retreats, rests in a pitiable state of plaintive solemnity. On its front face, a single splintered shutter somberly hangs, pendulous and limp, from a rusted iron hinge beside the shattered panes of a window’s dust riddled glass. Fragmented pieces of an exploded shell have bored into the eastern side, vehemently tearing painted bricks from their mortar and listlessly casting them down upon the fastidiously tended garden beneath, crushing its contents. In the stillness evinced in the wake of the passing destruction, the remaining gabled roof mournfully creaks and bows in protestation of its own weight. Reticulated vines are badly singed, though still gracefully cling, with evident insouciance to the unsettling melancholy that has befallen their surroundings, to the scarred remnants of the building’s aged facade. From the open fields of knotted, wild grass that span the valley receding into the distance, the lifeless remains of provincial homes arise like decaying headstones in an ancient graveyard, heavily silhouetted against the vibrancy of the red hues of the setting sun. This diffusion of light from along the western horizon drifts with tranquil lassitude like a pall across the gnarled foliage and sporadic buildings, tinging all it settles upon with an almost preternatural glow of vivid, resplendent ruby. The tones of the pervading, languid haze are reflected in the luster of two black, inscrutable eyes, as an animated shadow is cast from the fretting flag along the lower portion of narrow, handsome lineaments belonging to a gentleman around forty-five years of age.

 

The man brushes untamed strands of thick, black hair out of the way of his austere gaze, before cuffing and rolling the sleeves of his loose-fitting collared shirt cinched beneath a buttoned, tattered vest. The elevated bones and veins of his thin, calloused hands prominently protrude as he tightly grasps the leather strap of his heavy knapsack, which has been closely secured in a diagonal fashion across his lithe frame. He heads east, towards the inexorable advancement of the muted blue shades of dusk, leaving a bold trail of his shoes’ markings atop the bevy of cacophonous imprints pressed into the surface of the dirt path. Clouds of swirling smoke rise and dissipate above the verdant canopy overhanging a sparse grouping of bent, prodigious trees that emerge from amongst the vast emptiness of farmland and sweeping plains nearby. Deferring to the guidance of the smoke, the man resolutely trudges forward, soon finding himself on the outer reaches of the forest where the thin smattering of trees gradually capitulates to a flat clearing along the banks of a spirited river. Nestled against the woods, a row of white canvas tents neatly interspersed with few constructed cooking pits constitutes the edge of a meager encampment. Unhitched wooden conveyances and wagons dispersed throughout the site are burdened with crates of unloaded provisions, consisting of an assortment of guns, bladed weapons, salted meats, dried vegetables, unworn pairs of boots displaying a dull sheen, folded uniforms dyed in hues of silver and blue, and various cooking implements. Squinting through the harshness of the direct, low-angled rays of the crepuscular sun, the man notices shallow trenches dug beyond the tents, which he has rapidly ascertained from the festering swarms of flies and undeniable smell wafting from their depths to be the latrines. The furthest end of the bivouac from the tents houses a line of horses that are each tied with a fraying rope to a wooden post driven into the soggy, amenable ground. At the middle of the encircling encampment, a recognizable navy flag of gaudy decoration is situated ostentatiously, where it rests, unmoving, upon its pole. An air of subdued jocularity settles amongst the men and women seated around the fires of the pits as they play songs of great evident popularity, draw protracted drags of cigarettes, and surreptitiously deal cards outside the ascetic watch of their superiors. In the uninterrupted blackness of the encroaching night, even the low-burning light of the shrinking flames shines luminously. Upon determining the lateness of the hour, a soldier of apparent status gruffly commands her subordinates to retire. Reluctantly, the jovial melodies and rhythmic interludes elicited from the euphonious unity of instrument and voice immediately fall silent, while the waning embers of the dying fires are unceremoniously extinguished. Few stragglers slowly head to their respective tents. Lowering himself into the shade formed from the elongated shadow of an ancient elm lain across the clotted, muddied ground, the man awaits, with calm, stoic anticipation, the muffled sounds of sleep to permeate the otherwise still expanse of unlit dwellings.

 

The shade of the crooked trees thrown from the sinking sun spreads and blurs, disappearing into a morass of shadows as the last vestiges of the striking red hues fade from the sky. Reposed against the grooved trunk and twisted roots of the elm, the man reaches beside him for a hand lantern that harbors a tiny, blue flame flickering within its glass and surveys the camp for indications of activity. Nothing moves save a few mounted, armed sentries. Enshrouded by the cover of the moonless night, the man crouches behind patches of dried brush and cautiously steps around fallen branches while heading towards the assemblage of tents and their sleeping residents. Kneeling quietly behind the row, he carefully sets down the lantern and unfurls his left-hand. His wiry fingers twitch almost imperceptibly as they trace, with mechanical precision, along the seams of the taut fabric.

 

The irrepressible smell of smoke and burning cloth thickly disperses through the unremitting darkness.

 

An unintelligible clamor reverberates through the camp as soldiers, dressed in their bedclothes and encumbered with the grogginess that often succeeds an abruptly terminated slumber, clamber to wrest their supplies from the path of rapidly spreading, deep blue flames. Dirtied pans and bowls still encrusted with the scraps from the evening’s meal are hurriedly carried back and forth from the bank of the neighboring river and poured frantically upon the voracious blaze in desperate attempt to stifle its devastation. Contented with the extent of the ensuing raucousness capturing the attention of the terrified soldiers, the man perambulates with assuredness around the periphery of the camp towards the kept horses. He bends down beside the prosaic, brown mare resting at the furthest location from the demarcation between woods and the clearing, and fixates upon the knot tethering the horse in place.

 

His fingertips are barely able to make contact with the braided rope.

 

Slicing swiftly and soundlessly through the dense, ashen air, a bladed weapon with a jagged, serrated edge is pressed threateningly against the pallid skin of the man’s vulnerable neck. An unrepentant grip intertwined amongst the unruly tangle of his black hair virulently forces his head backwards as a whispering voice, quivering and breaking with unrestrained derision, rhetorically asks, “This is your fault, isn’t it?”

 

“Yes.” His accentuated throat vibrates against the stiff metal as he responds in a tone inexplicably calm and unemotional.

 

With the employment of a single, deft maneuver, the man pivots his body clockwise while his left-hand clasps with fervid intensity the wrist that steadies the blade, separating it from his body. The effulgence of the fire ravaging the landscape behind the soldier causes an obscuring veil of darkness to drape over her face as she and the man breathe synchronously in stunted, shallow gasps. An ethereal blue light flashes with sudden immediacy, and in its brilliant illumination, the soldier is seen violently convulsing and recoiling in abject terror at the sight of the man’s visage. His irises are alighted and emanating an imperturbably solid blue glow. Glaring into his eyes and brutishly thrashing against the pertinacious malice of his grip, her face becomes transfixed in a grotesque contortion of features, eliciting a countenance of both shock and execrable agony. An oppressive stench, nauseating and acrid, rapidly overwhelms the pair, forcing them to steady their bodies against the insuperable urge to heave and retch. The man’s grasp, however, refuses to be relinquished. The soldier’s horrible expression slowly changes, and her lineaments soften into a pleading look steeped in despondent resignation that is, curiously, numb. The ardency with which the two stare into the other’s eyes remains unabated, and neither display cognizance nor react to the dull, wet thud of the knife dropping to the ground. From afar, few, impassioned footsteps are heard in succession scrambling in their haste to descend upon the intruder. In recognition of the approaching predicament, the man returns his eyes to the cold blackness of their previous state and pries, with discernable difficultly, his uncompromising fingers away from her skin. Blackened chunks of charred flesh cling to his hand during its removal as underlying muscle tendons are stretched taut before snapping and slipping off sections of exposed bone. The soldier staggers backwards upon her release, wracked with pernicious tremors that propagate her weakened frame. Her jaw seizes and her mouth is struck agape in a soundless scream of realization as she instinctually cradles the tenuous fibers and scarred bits of bone that form what little remains of her forearm. The man hurriedly turns from the sickening image left in his wake and sprints to the anxiously braying mare, his eyes soon regaining their unnatural, luminous coloration. A slick coating overspreads his left-hand with a smoothness like poured oil as its surface is ignited in the wild ferocity of deep blue flames. The worn threads of the rope tying the startled animal in place are instantly set ablaze, crackling and curling until their ashes scatter upon the trampled, dead grass below. The man mounts the liberated horse and spurs it into maintaining a frenzied gallop alongside the turbulent flow of the river crashing against the stagnant, immemorial stones that lie in its path.

 

The clangorous echo of indeterminate cries slowly fades into the distance.

 

PART 3- The Interactive Story

History: After reconciling the unfortunate notion that perhaps my ambitious projects would never even begin to encroach upon attaining completion, I had to deliberately restrain myself with respect to the length and the breadth of any future, successive work. Despite my prior exasperation with the extensive, insurmountable actualities of video game development, I selected the program, RPG Maker, as an accessible platform to construct the simplified designs and minimally demanding mechanics that I planned to incorporate into this short, predominantly narrative-driven experience. Conceptualized as an interactive story instead of a typical game, I intended to solely utilize the features and attributes concomitant with the immersive medium of video games to bolster the conveyance of the paramount pathos and themes intrinsic to the overarching narrative. Essentially, I thought it somewhat apt to explore the effects of external influences on one’s choices metaphorically through the relationship between the players’ ability to guide their character and the moments when that control is rescinded.

The odd style and presentation of the following script is reflective of the format offered by RPG Maker and my attempts to carefully plan and structure how the dialogue would be showcased in the game itself. When writing a novel or directing any spoken medium of storytelling, the cadence, inflection, volume, tempo, and underlying emotion are demonstrated through the vividly descriptive language or the actors’ performance and line delivery, respectively. The appearance of the dialogue onscreen is analogous to these techniques, with the spaces or breaks between lines indicating timed pauses in the text, while the increased distance between words represents labored or slowed speech.

Additionally, I suppose I was still subconsciously aware of the untenability of this project in its interactive story form, and, resultantly, the intervals of instructive text between the dialogue exchanges are far too extensive and descriptive for a simple game script. The language is therefore a bit transitory, neither succinct enough for a script nor sufficiently expressive and meticulous in its composition to constitute a satisfactory short story of its own accord.

Though the eventual resumption and formalized creation of this interactive story may yet reside within the realm of possibility, I currently have suspended the piece when the artwork, animations, and efforts with RPG Maker again proved insuperably burdensome.

Background: As a monumentally fascinating and brilliant individual, Nikola Tesla and his numerous achievements were a considerable source of inspiration that influenced much of the fictionalized science and technology presented throughout the narrative. Additionally, at the time of drafting this work, I had read through Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s proudest novel, for which he was knighted, that contextualized and defended many of the behaviors enacted by the British Empire against its colonized, South African subjects before and during The Second Anglo-Boer War of 1899-1902. His account was rather harrowing to behold in its entirety, especially when contrasted with the excoriating perspectives harbored by those who had also witnessed the decisions and tactics the British armies employed.

*The sections which emulate the format and text of a newspaper are optional, and can be entirely ignored or partially read at the discretion of the player who encounters them. The information provided is supplemental and intended to augment the background lore and atmosphere surrounding the recent predicaments a particular city, along with its constituent citizens, is forced to endure. The farcical tone of the articles is referential to the Ladysmith Lyre, which was a real satirical paper written to provide a semblance of sardonic levity to the grievous lives of its besieged townspeople. Overall, it was quite the experience for me to compose news columns that were redolent of the Lyre’s comedic, sarcastic language.

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Scene 1

A telegraph operator/engineer sits hunched before a complicated system of machines with headphones secured over her ears. The tent which envelopes the scene is illuminated in the pale, crimson tones of a low-burning gas lantern, which casts somnolent shadows obfuscating the remainder of the area. A slow-moving outline traipses behind the engineer and situates itself against the left edge of the tent. A single, blue glow flashes effulgently through the darkness, immediately arresting the engineer’s attention. She grabs the lantern and turns towards the disturbance, revealing the source of the blue light to be a sole bulb tightly secured into the eye-socket of a worn automaton. She kneels before it with pink slips of paper in hand and begins to scrawl dexterously when rhythmic, syncopated beeps are elicited from her unmoving companion. She leans into a conical-shaped mouthpiece riveted against the metal frame of the automaton and articulates her reply.

 

E: “Continue.”

 

The translated contents of the transmitted message are depicted onscreen.

 

-Lead Telegraph Engineer (L.T.E) Berenice Turner                          11/03/1902

We are requesting your services to escort this automaton to coordinates 25˚ 33’ 0” S 28˚ 11’ 0” E for repairs. Will signal with further instruction. Respond with haste.

          -Telegraphist Cecil Tregennis for Macluto Telautomatics, Main Station

 

The engineer raises from her position and settles at the front of the imposing machinery. She taps out her reply on a telegraph key and compiles a consortium of supplies into multiple, amorphous bundles that are tied together into a wearable knapsack. Glancing wearily at the automaton, she lays upon a prosaic cot and stifles the lantern’s quivering flames.

The radiant light emanating from the automaton’s lone bulb gradually dies.

Fade out.

Scene 2

Fade in.

The canvas stretched across the background of the frame scatters a diffusion of soft, morning light, casting a pale haze across the few visible features and extruding subtle shadows along the trodden, dirt floor. The engineer wakes and straps the laden knapsack onto her back.

She exits the tent.

Its flap is left open, allowing luminescent sunlight to pervade its interior in a concentrated beam which drapes gently along the ground and across the tarnished metal plates of the automaton.

 

The player, now in control of the automaton, will emulate the engineer’s egress.

 

The automaton will emerge amidst the clamor of regimented, daily activities of a small bivouac populated with ragged, yet jovial, soldiers, trailing in the wake of the engineer.

A garish flag of navy and silver is affixed, hanging limply in the stagnant air, between two tents.

 

E: “Follow closely.”

 

Control is wrested from the player as the automaton imperturbably yields to the orated command.

 

The laminar stream of a quiet breeze propagates few undulations across the rippling fabric of the gaudy flag.

Fade out.

Scene 3

Fade in.

A cutscene plays, depicting the engineer leading the encumbered, slow-moving machine through unremitting bellows of copper-hued dust. In the midst of their silent perambulation across the arid plains, the automaton’s single eye bulb flashes blue, following which the engineer ceases in her strident pace and kneels before it. She transcribes the message upon another piece of pink paper.

The hastily written interpretation appears onscreen.

 

Refrain from opening the internal cavity and disturbing its delicate mechanisms. Adjustments to be made only if communication functions have ceased.

 

She dictates her reply to the automaton.

 

E: “Confirmed.”

 

With uncompromising resolution, the engineer persists in her venture. The player gains control over the automaton and will trail behind her for a few paces. She interrupts the transient enjoyment of agency with a command.

 

E: “Come along.”

 

Puissant tones of gray and blue dilute the dull gleam of golden rays diffusing from the sun as it sinks with lassitude beneath the horizon.

Fade out.

Scene 4

Fade in.

The two journeying companions sit reposed around resplendent, flickering flames at the center of a meager camp. Emulative of the preceding scene, the automaton’s eye signals an incoming message, which is subsequently delivered without the prior receipt of the engineer’s confirmation.

 

E: “Wait, hold on… Mr. Tregennis, please re-transmit your previous message.”

 

She is met with silence.

 

E: “Damn it.”

 

She mulls silently for a moment, eyes closed, reconstructing the patterns of dots, dashes, and pauses from memory.

 

E: “‘Diverting our course five kilometers west will yield an intersection with a mining city. We can find temporary respite there.’”

 

Initially incredulous to the veracity of her translation, the engineer opens her eyes with immediacy and shakes her head.

 

E: “No, that’s… far too informal.”

E: “Though accurate, I’m fairly certain…”

 

She appears quizzical, staring with narrowed eyes and lineaments contorted with consternation at the motionless automaton. She raises her eyebrows and shakes her head dismissively.

 

Wavering ribbons of smoke curl and intermingle as they dissipate from the amber fires crackling euphoniously between the silent pair. The camera traces the languid motions of the rising columns until the ashen plumes are lost amongst the enveloping turbidity of low-lying clouds.

Fade out.

Scene 5

Fade in.

The pair are standing at a precipice overlooking an expanse of dried, knotted fields bounded by jagged, craggy formations disappearing into a thin film of fog in the distance. The visage of a solemn city, crumbling and blackened in the aftermath of heavy artillery fire, is discernable through the haze surrounded by dispersed groupings of tents and entrenchments. The shrill exultation of an operating steam train escaping from the city’s periphery fixates the engineer’s attention upon the curved trail of the rail line as it weaves between the isolated cliffs that punctuate the grasses of the withering veld.

 

The automaton’s single bulb flashes, succeeded with immediacy by a rapid delivery of Morse Code.

 

A: “Accessibility of nearby quarries has not been compromised in spite of recent tribulations in their propinquity.”

 

The engineer recoils from the unanticipated interjection.

 

E: “That’s… wonderful, mind explaining how you knew what I was looking at, Mr. Tregennis?”

 

Silence is the only response she receives.

 

E: “…I didn’t require an answer anyway, thank you.”

 

E: “Additionally, can you please give prior warning before initiating contact next time? My heart is palpitating.”

A: “Understood.”

 

Reconstituting a facsimile of her confident composure, she folds her arms tightly against her lithe frame.

 

E: “I hadn’t realized it was such a priority for us to protect these mines specifically.”

A: “Ionium’s military utility has been recognized since-”

E: “Ionium?”

 

E: “I-I see.”

 

The engineer looks askew.

 

The obfuscating murkiness of fog condenses in the slight concavity of the sparse plains where the decrepit remains of the restless city are nestled.

Fade out.

Scene 6

Fade in.

Along the plaintive, desolate streets of the city, the two trudge in respectful silence, carefully stepping around discarded remnants of buildings, cabs, and streetlamps coated in an undisturbed layer of thick, black ash.

The automaton activates, emanating a flash of its single bulb before awaiting explicit confirmation of the engineer’s recognition.

The engineer ceases walking in response and control is removed from the player as the automaton reciprocates her action.

Following this attainment of her focus, the automaton begins to transmit its message.

 

A: “I advise that we depart at your earliest convenience tomorrow morning. Delays will needlessly protract our journey.”

E: “ ‘Course. We could plan to…”

 

A realization slowly emerges, percolating through the capacious recesses of her mind and commandeering the entirety of her attention.

 

E: “…We could… our journey…that odd, informal address again…”

 

Spurred by the sudden insatiable desire for confirmatory evidence, the engineer anxiously sprints in the opposite direction of their current trajectory.

 

E: “Stay within the city. I’ll be in the Telegraph Office.”

 

She hurries out of frame. Exploration is subsequently encouraged, as the opportunity exists for the player to fully control the automaton and traverse the length of the city.

During its labored perambulation of the city streets, the automaton witnesses a forming line of sullen, downtrodden laborers clothed in tattered layers of ill-fitting garb. The sinuous trail culminates before a wagon laden with various provisions, distributed by soldiers dressed in the same navy and silver uniform as the engineer. The mud-clotted threads of the soldiers’ worn raiment reciprocate the disheveled state of the civilians, and their gaunt features protruding through sallow skin elicit haggard countenances. Beyond the emaciated figures encumbered with the frailty of residual sickness, piles of refuse and effluent are consumed voraciously by flies. A garish flag, ostentatious in the incongruity of its vivid, unblemished hues of navy and silver, is hung across a crumbling brick façade.

During the automaton’s excavation of aggregated waste, old, discarded newspapers are found and read. The image of the headline along with its contents will be viewable onscreen:

 

THE KIMASMITH TIMES                                    18/06/1899

 

Much adoration to our readers who have made The Kimasmith Times the most widely printed satirical siege paper, clearing outselling that of our competitors. [Of which, we are obliged to state, there were none.]

 

DR. SCHMOOFHOWZIER FINALLY DISCOVERS KIMASMITH                   18/06/1999

The illustrious Dr. Schmoofhowzier has recently published his scintillating account of his excavation of the lost city, Kimasmith, which was postulated to have been ignored for a hundred years while its citizens waited silently for reinforcements to liberate them. Learned scholars previously assumed a place of such legendary patience must only reside amongst the pages of lore; however, arguing that it did, in fact, exist, Schmoofhowzier set out to remind his home country of the forgotten people their ancestors long since abandoned.

He proceeded to get lost in the featureless plains.

After over a year of this circuitous wandering, he encountered by pure chance evidence suggesting the city contained valuable treasure in its midst. Subsequent to receiving this information, our addlepated adventurer happened to find his way straight there without further diversion. [Note: this account was remarked upon with much incredulity by the poor fools funding his research.] Dr. Schmoofhowzier soon ascertained that the city was razed not from unceasing shell-fire, debilitating starvation and thirst, festering filth, dysentery and its companion diseases, but rather, from boredom. [Yes, boredom.] The malignance of which is well known in academia to have felled innumerable civilizations of antiquity.

Questions to his mental stability promptly ignored, Schmoofhowzier enumerated the activities this doomed society regularly engaged in to stave away the pernicious influence of monotony. He professed they, in their pitiable desperation, often placed bets on the number of shells likely to make contact the upcoming day. Alas, even the irreverent morbidity of said action proved inefficacious, and the city lost its venerable battle against boredom. According to Schmoofhowzier, some entombed remains can be found intact, clearly depicting the citizens, somnolent heads resting in hands, still awaiting liberation from their captors.

It can be said that these ancient peoples were pertinacious, at least, if not horribly dense and idealistic.

Actual News

Efforts have been undergone to locate and eviscerate supply stocks employed by commandoes to maintain their evasive, sanguinary tactics.

 

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THE KIMASMITH TIMES                                    23/10/1901                                       

Though the siege has ended, our dedication to journalistic integrity certainly has not! [Incidentally, we regret to admit that our status as the best-selling paper has since been revoked.]

 

DR. SCHMOOFHOWZIER’S RESEARCH ON EMBARRASSMENT NOW AVAILABLE           23/10/2001

The successive investigative chronicle of the venerated Dr. Schmoofhowzier has recently achieved acclaim following its broad, public proliferation. This publication marks the second edition in his anthology into the factors contributing to fall of history’s most obstinate civilizations. Next in his detailed enumeration of said pernicious attributes is the much-maligned trait of embarrassment, which is best exemplified in his discussion into its prevalence within the depraved ancient society of the Azugrades. One hundred years ago, in acknowledgement of the insuperable difficulties accrued from electing to engage a superior force in combat, scores of Azugrade soldiers and civilians alike starting surrendering to their adversary. [Apparently, the communicable infectiousness of embarrassment had yet to permeate these contingents of their population.] Schmoofhowzier’s exhaustive efforts concluded that the accommodations welcoming the penitent were more than hospitable, and these defeated individuals were oft found carousing to the luxuries of being well-fed and safe from the depravities of war. Jealousy, rather understandably, became a rampant affliction in the homes of the Kimasmith citizens as they surveyed the scrumptiously prepared horse carcasses that constituted their evening’s delicacy.

In their desperation, they entertained the possibility of feigning defection to the Azugrades. Schmoofhowzier emphatically lauds the bravery and dedication of these people considering the danger and strenuousness of what they endured in order to accomplish this deception-- weeks of training as amateur dramatists. Unfortunately, they were insufficiently adept at acting to fool their commanders, who, to everyone’s surprise, also happened to be esteemed Shakespearean interpreters and renown drama critics famous for the acrimony of their reviews. [We have yet to find confirmatory evidence corroborating the existence of such multi-talented individuals.] Dejected, and discouraged from ever pursuing careers on the stage once the war finally ceased, the citizens reluctantly turned their attentions to uncovering methods of imbuing horse meat with a flavor slightly more palatable than that of dead, acrid animal.

Schmoofhowzier pontificates on the trend of enemy civilians begging to be abandoned by their retreating columns and forming raucous lines greeting the advancing forces of our ancestors with palpable elation. It is a pitiable circumstance indeed when your own citizens are better off in the hands of the enemy than in your own. The subsequent contraction of embarrassment became far too virulent and pervasive for the Azugrades, and they refused to capitulate and assent to the munificent terms of the proposed peace negotiations. Cheeks florid in the shame of continuous defeat and their fingers plugged deeply into their ears, they armed the cadaverous bodies of their soldiers with few, broken armaments and went confidently back into the fray.

Suffice it to say, Schmoofhowzier was unable to clarify whether the subsequent protraction of war was attributable to the tenacity of the enemy in their avoidance of contagious embarrassment or to the horrific failures of our ancestors.

As to the ineluctable culmination of this obdurate persistence, Dr. Schmoofhowzier remarks that the bones of Azugrade soldiers were found interred beneath the beautiful fields of their farmlands, which are still excoriated by scores of reticulated trenches and punctuated by the capacious depressions formed in the wake of the shell-fire that graced these lands one hundred years ago.

Schmoofhowzier speculates that the deceased commandoes are currently lying in a state of peaceful repose in the arid ground, still thinking to themselves, “Well, at least we never gave in!”.

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Upon the culmination of the automaton’s exploratory endeavors, it enters beneath the frame denoting the entrance to the telegraph office.

Fade out.

Scene 7

Fade in.

The automaton appears in a room interspersed with sporadic desks and mechanical equipment. The weak, crepuscular sunlight tinged with dull, crimson hues filters through a paned window stained with splotches of leaden gunpowder. The engineer is standing over a desk, adroitly handling a small, intricate device.

 

E: “This is incredibly ludicrous…”

 

In recognition of the automaton’s presence, she finalizes her deft manipulation of the coiled wires and iron armatures comprising the compact mechanism and approaches her companion.

  

E: “We’re going to partake in a little… empirical research.”

 

The engineer brandishes the tangible culmination of her preceding labors: an electromagnet powered by a single battery.

 

E: “If I’m not allowed to adjust this automaton’s inductance internally, perhaps temporary interference is permissible instead?”

A: “An imaginative circumvention.”

 

She kneels and presses the electromagnet against the automaton’s chest cavity.

 

E: “Um…well, then. Either you will no longer be able to reply, which indicates I had been conversing directly with another telegraphist, or...”

A: “Affirmative to the latter, implied supposition.”

A: “Though a sample size of one is usually insufficient for an effective trial.”

 

She stalls, transfixed with incredulity and shock. Her hand instinctually grasps at the central region of her chest.

 

E: “Dare I question how?”

A: “The current consilience of evidence attributes this feature to the Ionium compound in the circuitry, though the study of the precise mechanism is still in its infancy.”

E: “So, if I am understanding correctly, your… awareness… is an unintentional biproduct, and they have no idea why it happened.”

A: “Yes.”

E: “Lovely.”

 

She is silent for a moment, evidently lost amongst irrepressible cogitations. Sudden realization and its resultant trepidation supplant this period of reflection.

 

E: “Can you tell me how much of the preceding exchanges was ours? Alone?”

A: “All direct injunctions originated with your superiors, and your responses were promptly sent. Personal thoughts were deemed impertinent and therefore not relayed.”

E: “Your consideration is truly profound.”

 

The engineer shuts off the battery connected to the electromagnet and stores the system in her knapsack. She rises and heads towards the exit.

 

E: “You… should probably follow.”

 

Fade out.

Scene 8

Fade in. The faded light from the window of the telegraph office is incorporated into the slinking sun featured prominently throughout this scene.

 

A path of clotted mud and aggregated stones of disparate sizes bifurcates patches of tangled, trampled grass. The sun’s rays emanate from lower and lower angles as the engineer and automaton wordlessly compact the amenable ground beneath them. Protracted shadows begin to creep from the gnarled brush and few, bent trees lining the thoroughfare. The visage of the city appears escaping into distance, lost amongst the impenetrable haze of the gathering fog.

Fade out.

Scene 9

Fade in.

A steep cliff-face arises from the expanse of empty fields as muted tones of purple and red permeate the regions of the crepuscular sky where the tips of the wild grasses meet the horizon. A silhouetted tower with a hemispherical dome, imposing and ostentatious, overlays the blended hues of sunset while the two companions ascend the eroded mountain. They pause briefly once at its summit and stare out at the outline of the inscrutable tower, the multitudinous garrisons dotting the area surrounding it, and the precipitous drop before them.

 

E: “I… Er…”

E: “I had been meaning to ask about the extent of your submissiveness to dictated commands. Hopefully, you can indulge what is, I assure you, purely scientific intrigue.”

A: “I cannot have reservations. Proceed.”

E: “Hypothetically, If I instructed you to roll right over the edge, how would you respond?”

 

The automaton turns to face the engineer.

 

A: “I would question your motives, first. Not out of self-preservation; it is simply an egregious waste of expensive machinery.”

 

It once again fixates the gaze of its single bulb upon the tower.

 

A: “To answer, I couldn’t comply with such a request. Though the enumerated commands newer-iteration automata can understand are more complex, we are still limited in what we can do.”

E: “Considering this…well, forgive me, but is impregnable wireless telegraphy, in the form of an automaton specifically, really a justifiable investment?”

 

She looks over at the automaton.

 

E: “…The apparent achievement of creating a facsimile of sapience notwithstanding.”

A: “You must trust the assiduousness of your government on that matter.”

 

The automaton evaluates its options for an addendum to substantiate its prior assertion. In the interim, the engineer raises an eyebrow, shakes her head, and retreats from the cliff’s edge. It faces her, and projects Morse Code at her back.

 

A: “However, I can reveal that we are now able to perform menial labors without articulated instruction.”

E: “Fantastic. Now, let’s go.”

 

The automaton follows at her behest.

Fade out.

Scene 10

Fade in.

Ruby fires crackle and fade amongst the entangled, dried twigs and branches as the pervading darkness of night advances on the camp of the companion travelers. A map is unfurled between them. The silhouette of the tower and its encircling battlements still loom, blending into the encroaching blackness of the twilight sky.

The engineer indicates towards these intimidating fixtures.

 

E: “I’ve never seen such a profound assemblage of defensive installations in one location.”

E: “Of course, I understand that ceding reliance on kilometers of severable communication cables is beneficial, but…”

A: “Its importance in that regard should not be diminished.”

E: “Undoubtedly. Still… to necessitate this amount of protection?”

 

She holds her arms across her chest and tilts her head in an outward demonstration of internal rumination.

 

E: “Mind expatiating on its alternative uses, if it has any? Specifically pertaining to automata.”

E: “I’m aware this is the station from which my mission regarding you was originally sent.”

A: “I suppose it is permissible to acquiesce. Essentially, automata are not discriminating about the source of vocalized injunctions, apart from comprehending only a single language; yours.”

A: “Therefore, for additional security, there is a hierarchy of command that prioritizes the incoming orders from this transmitter, and by extension, the military.”

A: “Remote access and direct control over our activities is also achievable from that tower.”

E: “Again, the rationale for these expensive measures alludes me, given your notable limitations in utility. It seems… redundant and needless.”

A: “It is not within my capabilities to dispel this obfuscating confusion in you.”

 

She shrugs and raises with somnolent hesitance, trudging towards the opening flap of her tent.

 

E: “I guess it would be quixotic to assume you could do otherwise.”

E: “I do appreciate the extent of your honesty, though.”

E: “Goodnight.”

 

The engineer ducks beneath the sagging entry to her tent and removes herself from view. Remaining stationary in the solitude left in her absence, the automaton rests its gaze, resolute and uncompromising, upon the blurred outline of the tower as the structure is slowly overtaken by the seeping shadows of the starless night sky. Flecked with patches of flaking rust, the tarnished plates comprising the automaton’s stature are tinged a muted red in the dim reflection of the vivacious flames burning at the automaton’s side.

 

An undefinable length of time passes.

 

Residual embers flicker meekly before dying out in an unceremonious instant, plunging the scene into abject darkness.

Scene 11

Fade in.

An inexorable gathering of dense clouds, blackened and swollen in restraint of a tempestuous torrent threatening sudden, vehement expulsion, overhangs the well-kneaded mud thoroughfare currently conducting the engineer and the automaton towards their destination.

The imperturbable advance of the pair alongside an unremittent tangle of coarse brush and knotted foliage is stymied with immediacy upon the sight of dried blood interspersed with discordant imprints left by a horse’s hooves.

Impacting the malleable ground with the toes of her leather boots and weighted knees, the engineer closely inspects the markings outlined in the damp clay.

 

E: “A lone messenger, or scout, perhaps? Shot from atop their horse, judging by the tracks.”

 

The automaton overtakes her on the path and sifts through the contents of a discarded, emptied knapsack, its cold appendage brushing against the tattered, splitting threads dyed a vibrant russet from the seeping stains of clotted blood.

 

A: “All useful supplies have been ransacked. This letter is the only source of valuable information remaining.”

 

The automaton passes a creased letter to the engineer for translation.

 

E: “’They aren’t far. We can smell the smoke left in their wake. As soon as you get this letter, pack the wagon and head north. I won’t be far behind, I promise. Remind Thomal I love him every second of every day and to trust that things will get better in time. Love to you both. See you soon.’”

 

A: “The path does not bifurcate from here for miles. It is possible we may intercept the message’s intended recipient.”


E: “Are we to bring warning in this person’s stead?”

A: “Would they not be receptive? If we are timely in reaching them, that is.”

E: “That would be dependent on…well,”

E: “who they were running from.”

 

They proceed forward in silence.

 

The smattering of entangled foliage gradually capitulates to an inexorable projection of desolate farmland.

 

Twisted coils of a barbed wire fence cordon the untamed clamber of fraying stalks of wheat and, with every gust of a placid wind, impale the soft crops against the serrated spikes of its rigid, cold steel.

The engineer views the inhospitable fence trespassing across the displaced stones of the lone path with austere indifference before yielding at its seemingly interminable breadth. She drops to a sole knee, rifling through the multitudes of scattered supplies which lie in disarray at the bottom of her knapsack, and procures a wire-cutter and additional tools. She passes the instruments to the automaton, who receptively clasps them between the single clamp constituting its grip and begins to separate the solenoidal fence. Upon its severance, the engineer maneuvers through the narrow gap and reassumes her strident pace without looking back. The automaton remains, inserting its forearms amongst the coils as it labors to reconnect the fence in their wake.

The protruding metal brambles tear with voracious, yet impotent, fervidity as they entwine with the weathered, pealing surface of the automaton’s oxidizing extremities. The automaton persists, unconcerned, in its convictions, reverting its course and following the engineer only after the reattachment of the imposing barbed wire is completed.

 

Fade out.

Scene 12

Fade in. The movement speed of the automaton is reduced slightly from its previous state.

With silent lassitude, a gentle breeze rustles the overgrown blades of pale, yellowing wheat. The two travel parallel to the entangled crops and, as they persist in arduously trampling over loose, coarse bits of gravel, the appearance of the wheat gradually alters. Dried stalks bend and yield beneath the encumbering weight of their dead neighbors. Leaden ash collects in granulated piles between the stones of the path and blackened scars begin to permeate through the still, melancholic fields. Eventually, charred shreds of the remaining crops lie undisturbed in a cacophonous disarray upon the seared earth. Melted on one of its sides, a child’s wagon coated in faded, chipped red paint rests precariously with a perceptible cant against its warped, rusted wheels.

The engineer and the automaton emerge amidst a clearing surrounding a one-story farmhouse. The abandoned home’s mortar crumbles, weakened by the scorching flames which had voraciously consumed its antique frame, and its remaining roof bows in capitulation to its own weight.

The pair cautiously peers through the open doorframe.

 

E: “We might as well. After you.”

 

Fade out.

Scene 13

Fade in.

Reciprocating the derelict appearance of its exterior, a prosaic, meager room greets the engineer and automaton as they gain entry to the creaking farmhouse. The skeletal remnants of few furniture items are discernable amongst the ashes and collapsed wooden beams.

 

E: “See if there’s anything of value left behind.”

 

The player regains control over the automaton and is afforded the opportunity to scour the premises for scattered reminders of the little home’s previous residents. This transient enjoyment of autonomy is rescinded when specific items are encountered, namely, photographs depicting a mother, father, and their son, children’s toys, and a charred marionette missing one of its eyes.

The engineer dexterously fiddles with her electromagnet apparatus while the automaton is indisposed.

 

E: “Check under the bed.”

 

The automaton assents, finding a stack of retained letters preserved in a decorative, metal box.

 

A: “Can you translate this language?”

 

The automaton roughly creases the pages of a few, opened letters as it carries them over to the busied engineer.

She looks up quizzically, and assents with discernable affability.

 

E: “‘Course.”

 

The engineer parses through the papers.

 

E: “I’ll just summarize their contents for you.”

E: “The wife fought as a commando, apparently.”

 

She shuffles through the next few messages.

 

E: “She frequently inquires into the well-being and safety of her family.”

E: “Hmm…?”

E: “‘One of our members learned that his family was captured during their escape after their farm was torched. Last he heard, they were crammed into wagons heading for… heading… for…’”

 

She stifles her voice before it cracks as her head bows in repressed shame. Taking a pause to compose herself, she persists slowly.

 

E: “‘We could do nothing to comfort him.’”

E: “’Yet, he still refused to surrender and urged us to do the same.’”

 

E: “This was the last letter she sent. Or at least the last one they received.”

 

Protracted silence permeates as the engineer crumples the letters and lets them fall listlessly to the splintering, singed wooden planks that line the floor.

 

The unsettling stillness momentarily returns. She distractedly resumes making alterations to her mechanisms.

 

E: “Did you find anything else?”

A: “All that remains are meretricious personal items. I am disregarding them due to their worthlessness.”

E: “Leave them where they lie. The family might return to collect them once the war is over.”

 

She refuses to look directly at the automaton.

 

A: “Unlikely. If they shared the fate of their neighbors then, probabilistically speaking, they are already dead.”

 

She immediately ceases her activities and raises her eyes with desperate ferocity.

 

E: “W-What?”

 

 

 

A: “You knew what our holding camps were like, did you not?”

 

Silence festers unabated for a brief moment.

 

E: “I-I thought…”

A: “Survival rates have been incredibly low, especially amongst children, therefore, logically,”

E: “STOP! Damn it!”

 

Emerging from despondent introspection, the engineer solemnly stares down at the furtive motions of her sinewy fingers.

 

E: “The… consolidation… of large quantities of people for their safety can unfortunately incur the proliferation of illness.”

E: “It is a natural consequence of living in a war-ravaged nation.”

E: “Their treatment could have been magnanimous, considering the circumstances…”

E: “Nothing…intentionally… unsavory or unsanitary…”

 

A: “I cannot contest the slight possibility. Lacking the opportunity to evaluate the camps directly, we must rely on testimonials and correspondences alone.”

 

E: “C-Correspondences?”

 

She rests her head in her hands as indominable realization overtakes her with sudden vehemence.

 

 

 

E: “In the messages I transmitted, there were references to… contending with those whom they deemed ‘undesirable’.”

 

 

E: “I can’t recall how many times I tapped out every letter of that word.”

E: “I assumed it only pertained to these armed insurgents. Not to their families. Not to this.”

 

She indicates to the devastation surrounding them.

 

E: “I swear, I didn’t know what would happen to them.”

 

 

 

A: “You did what you were commanded to do.”

 

The engineer turns her head and stares, numb and listless, through a diminutive window devoid of its glass.

 

A: “We should not delay our journey any further.”

 

He awaits her response. She refuses to offer one.

 

A: “Though perhaps leaving tomorrow would also be permissible.”

 

She meets the single-bulb gaze of machine, who had fixated its attention uninterruptedly on her visage.

 

 E: “No, I’ll be fine. You were right, anyway. There isn’t anything for us here.”

 

She rises and heads towards the exit.

Fade out.

Scene 14

Fade in.

The companions pour over a map of their encompassing vicinity, planning their next course. Visible rail lines thread a sinuous trail through the pass carved from the immemorial mountains in the distance.

 

A: “Traveling parallel to this rail line from the Ionium quarry would be the shortest route for the time being.”

 

The engineer nods and folds the map along its pronounced creases. She proceeds to slide it into a narrow recess formed between the consortium of items in her knapsack. Distracted by the desultory cogitations festering uninterruptedly in her mind, she meanders along the ridge without elevating her gaze beyond the sodden ground trampled beneath the balding soles of her mud-caked boots.

Moments of unsettling quiet pass before she accumulates sufficient assuredness to articulate her tumultuous thoughts.

 

E: “Everything I have done whilst here was in service to our citizens.”

E: “Or, at least, that’s what I fervently believed.”

E: “However, I think I always knew their tribulations were not the paramount reason for our presence here.”

A: “It was one of many.”

 

E: “I remember back at home when the papers used to dedicate a small column to the discussion of ongoing conciliatory arbitration.”

 

E: “From their assurances, it always seemed we were far from that odious precipice which overlooks the dawn of armed conflict.

 

E: “Then, unexpectedly, there it was. The declaration of war boldly gracing the front page.”

A: “It is interesting you considered war to be unanticipated. In the face of uncompromising truculence and indominable ideological incongruities, diplomatic endeavors have been occasionally inefficacious.”

E: “I’m intimately familiar with that concept.”

E: “I simply mean that our control over this colony was always tenuous and indifferent. The unceremonious reversal of The Crown’s position, therefore, must have been predicated on an additional impetus.”

 

The shrill whistle of a passing train interjects amidst their conversation, transfixing the pair in place.

 

E: “It always comes back to that, doesn’t it?”

E: “I know it was encountered in the mines here not long before us reinforcements were deployed.”

A: “That is quite the simplification of the situation. You must understand why your government decided-”

E: “I wish I didn’t.”

 

Pivoting briskly in avoidance of a potential resumption in the automaton’s explication, the engineer proceeds with a hurried, breathless gait away from the assumed scrutiny of its unblinking glare.

 

Fade out.

 

The piercing note of the train’s whistle is struck once more.

 

It gradually declines in pitch until no longer audible.

Scene 15

Fade in.

Diffusing from the horizon line in the distance, deep crimson tones bleed across the sky and settle like a pall upon the expanse of dried plains lain at its base. Trails of trenches excoriate the fields and prodigious holes born from heavy artillery fire punctuate the landscape. Reverberant gunfire and cries from a nearby altercation echo clangorously between the rocky precipices which loom on either side of the path taken by the engineer and her companion automaton. The two come upon a clearing overlooking the battlefield below.

The engineer glances apprehensively at the view.

Fade out.

Scene 16

Fade in.

With deliberate, plodding footfalls in deference to the plaintive solemnity of her morose surroundings, the engineer cautiously trudges forward. The automaton follows in her wake, attempting, with the application of its full dexterity, to weave around abandoned trenches, exploded sandbags, and deep depressions carved into the rust-colored dirt. Torn shreds of navy blue and silver uniforms rest scattered across the site while a downed flag, reciprocating the faded hues of these uniforms, drapes somnolently against the remains of passing destruction.

The two happen upon a defunct automaton lying discarded amongst the rubble. Its body is prodigious in bulk, while unrefined and inelegant in form, and the simplicity in its construction betrays an elementary nature to the automaton’s design.

 

E: “Wait.”

 

The automaton immediately ceases in its quiet peregrination as the engineer kneels before the rusted, metal frame sinking into the russet dust.

 

E: “Do you mind if I remove these plates? If I recall, my orders did not preclude opening older variants of automata.”

A: “You may persist.”

 

She removes the securing rivets with careful nimbleness and opens the front hatch, taking notes as she proceeds.

 

E: “The sounder has been removed… actually, most of its mechanisms are missing. The circuitry is intact, though evidently has long since fried, and the engine is dreadfully worn.”

A: “This degradation is to be anticipated.”

A: “It is the unfortunate result of a perfunctory development cycle, hastened so as to be compatible with mass production, in conjunction with a rudimentary understanding of Ionium’s properties.”

E: “Hmm…”

E: “What is the expected latency between deployment and decommission for automata?”

A: “Ten months is a conservative estimate.”

E: “At which point some parts are then salvaged and the remaining shell is abandoned?”

 

The automaton answers with confirmatory silence.

 

E: “After a mere ten months… Wouldn’t that constitute, as you put it, an egregious waste?”

A: “Yes. However, newer automata have improved efficiency in end-of-usable-life proceedings.”

E: “Hence the need to escort you for repairs.”

 

The engineer returns the plate to its original position, screwing it in place. She rises.

 

E: “It appears to be far too late for these poor sods, however. Well, at least I’ll regard your patriotic sacrifice, my metallic friend.”

 

With gentle affability, the engineer lays her hand upon the cold surface of the automaton’s flaking metal dome as she travels beyond its motionless husk.

 

A: “‘Patriotic…?’”

 

The player is allowed to once again control the automaton as it follows in her wake.

 

A low rustle of leaves, bending in surrender to the restless bellows of a tepid breeze, is the only sound interrupting the dull thud of muted steps impacting into the soft, amenable ground.

 

The austerity of their deferential movements is maintained as the morbidity of their location foists an unrelenting sense of gloom and terror upon the shaken composure of the engineer. To her sides lie cavernous ruts of reticulated trenches, long since vacated and hollowed of their collapsing debris, marred against their sloping walls with sporadic stains of leaden powder from the residue of unreciprocated gunfire. Soundless echoes rise in a chorus of final, impotent screams from the depths of the empty sepulchers, ricocheting against insouciant stones and lifeless sand bags before dissipating into the stagnant mist and falling silent.

 

The automaton finally punctuates the ineffable disquietude.

 

A: “Can someone be considered a martyr if their sacrifice was coerced?”

 

A brief moment passes as the engineer ruminates upon the posited query, her chin sunken deeply against the top of her chest.

 

E: “They can surely be venerated, regardless of whether it was their intention to become one.”

 

Stillness again befalls the pair.

 

A: “And do you believe it was their intention?”

 

E: “Yes.”

E: “As far as they were aware.”

 

Despite the objections of her dissonant mind, the engineer’s sight gravitates towards an aimless search of the shadows of the capacious trenches, seeking, with recognition of the futility of her actions, any indication of stirring vitality from their enshrouded, noiseless pits.

 

Concurrently, the automaton angles its weighted, metal approximation of a skull downward, seemingly engaged in the contemplation of its motorized body as it purposelessly opens and closes its limited grasp.

 

Fade out.

Scene 17

Fade in.

The engineer and the automaton encroach upon a jagged cliff face overhanging a dense brush of gruff foliage that gradually thins into a smattering of individual, low-lying shrubs interspersed with the murky haze of fog dissipating throughout the valley.

 

 

 

An explosion of effulgent, blue flames suddenly radiates from amongst the tangled vegetation.

 

 

 

Propagating tremors rattle the ground beneath the pair and, in an impetuous gesture incentivized by insuppressible trepidation, the engineer scampers away from the overlook. She huddles protectively against the unwavering, stoic trunk of a nearby tree and covers her ears with tremulous hands.

 

The player is left in control of the austere automaton standing alone, unperturbed, at the edge.

 

In the disquieting stillness evinced from the settling clamor, the automaton approaches the engineer, arduously dragging steady, deep impressions from its tracks as it advances. When it finally reaches her side, control over its functions is revoked.

 

In noticing its presence, she looks up, exasperated, and wraps her arms around its metal frame, closing her eyes tightly.

 

The two remain unmoving in this position.

Fade out.

Scene 18

Fade in.

The clangorous brutality of a nearby fray resonates unceasingly across the expansive plains of trampled grass that lie before the companions.

The movements of the two are labored and slow.

 

The engineer stops.

 

A: “We are in close proximity to the designated coordinates. Persistence is encouraged.”

 

E: “I-I need to view the detonation site, first.”

A: “There is no perceivable benefit to that venture.”

E: “I disagree.”

E: “Their employment is still a rarity… I-Ionium explosives, that is. Am I correct?”

A: “Yes. The current paucity of Ionium has restricted the availability and use of its derivative weaponry. The resultant deployments are always opportune with respect to anticipated devastation.”

E: “Explain why, then, did we witness…”

E: “I wasn’t aware of any movements of enemy battalions in that area.”

A: “I cannot answer with certitude unless I acquire further information.”

 

E: “Then mark it on the map.”

 

She hoists the laden straps of her knapsack off her shoulders and plants the hulking mass of the leather bundle with delicate precision upon the impressionable ground. A map is procured and the location is denoted by the automaton.

 

A: “I can harbor no objections, only the mere suggestion that you refrain.”

A: “There may be no solace in the truth, regardless of its form.”

 

The map is folded and returned to its resting place.

 

E: “I won’t prioritize my own placation any longer.”

 

The engineer’s pace hastens after her direction is reversed. Without hesitation, the automaton reciprocates her trajectory, though its heavy gait cannot match the rapidity of her movements.

Fade out.

Scene 19

Fade in.

Following the faded imprint of a worn, trodden path as it leads through the arid veld towards a permeation of shade cast from an expanse of ancient trees and dried brush, the engineer and the automaton finally arrive at the location indicated to be the site of the witnessed detonation. At the culmination of the gravel trail, where the aggregation of disparate, loose stones widens into a dirt clearing, a profound, oppressive sense of horror seeps from amongst the residual shadows and drapes upon the vicinity like the ghastly veil of a phantasmagoric specter.

 

Frayed, wooden spokes of severed wheels jut out at violent angles, and their companion wagons have blackened and fused with the canvas sheathes covering them. Twisted skeletons of sporadic trees have solidified in their rigid contortions, bending with reluctant creaks when errant gusts of wind, intermingled with clumps of ash and dust, blow briskly by. Shredded pieces of green fabric drift with somber lethargy in the breeze, landing atop patches of ground stained a deep crimson from the indistinguishable mixing of blood and russet-colored clay. Forcefully discarded items scatter about the clearing, traceable, through striated scars marring the dirt, back to a charred, capacious depression resting ominously at the center of the area.

The engineer, unshackling herself the arresting shock which has bound her, stares, aghast, at the surrounding devastation before she proceeds in scouring the rubble beside the pit. Left to its own devices, the automaton, at the behest of the player, excavates the remains around the periphery of the clearing. In doing so, it encounters scores of warped rifles and ammunition melted to the tin cans of prosaic food supplies, torn uniforms of a faded, green shade, and multitudes of other varied resources.

After some time has passed with the two immersed in the beleaguering rumination over the gravity of their respective endeavors, the engineer calls the automaton to her side.    

 

E: “Come here”

 

 

 

 

She wields the distorted face plate of a new model automaton in her hands.

 

 

E: “How”

 

E: “The damage was on the interior of its metal plates.”

A: “There were design precautions-”

E: “From what little I was shown of your schematics, one of said enumerated precautions specified that the amounts of Ionium you contain were purported to be marginal and incontrovertibly innocuous, so, I reiterate; HOW”

A: “An errant explosion is impossible without significant internal damage.”

E: “Internal damage… Caused by what, do you suggest? I understood the casing of new automaton to be impervious to even heavy fire.”

A: “There are limits to the caliber and duration of what we can endure. Even still, it is highly improbable for a violent reaction to have been elicited.”

E: “Your damned limitations. Involuntary detonation, even if it is improbable, seems like an untenable risk for the sake of…”

 

E: “…what has yet eluded me.”

 

A: “It was, at least, a fortuitous occurrence in this instance.”

E: “fortuitous?”

A: “It   had   been   imparted   upon   me   that   such   pronounced   destruction   is laudable   when   said   loss   is    suffered   exclusively   by   the   enemy.”

 

The suddenness and brash honesty of the automaton’s profession seizes the engineer with an insuperable, rising sense of shame. In attempt to succeed in its concealment, she instinctually averts her eyes from the fixed glare of the automaton’s unlit bulb and hollow socket.

 

E: “Beneficial or otherwise, that is not my primary concern at the moment.”

 

Recollecting her resolution, she one again meets the emotionless, penetrating gaze emerging from behind the gunpowder-stained face plate of her automaton companion.

 

E: “This was a dismissible, rare error. You will attest to that statement’s veracity.”

A: “I    cannot     provide     an     alternative.”

E: “…Okay.”

 

The grotesque extrusion of rivets and metal plates still secured between her twitching, bent fingers is finally relinquished and subsequently laid, with respectful consideration, back upon the scorched earth.

As the two endeavor to leave their disturbed surroundings behind them, the camera retains its central focus on the distorted visage of the fragmented automaton.

 

Fade out.

Scene 20

Fade in.

Situated in a meager camp surrounded by the muted tones of a mid-afternoon sky, the engineer and the automaton rest quietly. She looks askew, her eyes never wavering from their solemn gaze out across the low-lying mist filtering between crumbling formations of eroded stones. Eventually, she removes a notebook and pencil from her knapsack and turns with bleak austerity to the automaton.

 

E: “I need to be alone for a while to work something out.”

E: “Stay within a fifty-meter radius, I’ll send for you once I’ve finished.”

A: “With   respect   to   the   lateness   of   the   hour, I   must   exhort   you   to   avoid   superfluous actions.”

E: “Please, I just need some time.”

A: “It   is   not   mine   to   give.”

E: “Spare me four hours. I’ll not exceed that duration. I promise.”

 

A: “I   shall   await   your   call, then.”

E: “T-Thank you.”

 

The automaton leaves the visage of the engineer, scribbling fervently upon her scrap papers, in its wake.

Fade out.

Scene 21

Fade in.

The enveloping echo of disparate sounds of war, discordant and inharmonious in their knell, grow ever louder as the automaton narrowly avoids entering their propinquity. Left to venture at its own discretion, the automaton explores, with purposeless directionality, the incongruous serenity of the turbid river and silhouetted trees that border the non-existent path of its peregrination. Impeded in the fluidity of its journey by the encrusted flakes of rust clinging to its track and the strained, syncopated shutters of its over-heated motor, it moves slowly forward. A diffusion of ruby rays tinges the sky with increasing brilliance as the duration of the automaton’s aimless perambulation is protracted. Above the breathless screams succeeding the crash of connecting bombardment, the quivering voice of the engineer immediately arrests the attention of the automaton.

 

E: “Return. Now.”

 

It obeys instantly.

Fade out.

Scene 22

Fade in.

The engineer, displaying the furrowed brow and distant, clouded stare of one laden with fatigue, sits restlessly atop a pile of crumpled blankets and hunches over the filled pages of her notebook.

The automaton enters the tent and engages her.

 

A: “If you have concluded, may we resume?”

E: “One moment. The specifications of that old, defunct automaton I opened earlier are considered standardized, correct?”

A: “For that iteration, yes.”

E: “Good. On this assumption, I attempted to mathematically reconstruct the circumstances surrounding the explosion.”

 

E: “However…”

 

E: “Even applying the most generous terms and considering multiple variations in the scenario, my calculations always concluded with an irreconcilable discrepancy between the Ionium used in the automaton and the quantity required to induce an explosion of that degree of violence.”

A: “It is possible you simply erred.”

E: “The figures are off so profoundly as to deem that explosion impossible. No matter what I try, I still can’t account for it…”

 

The obfuscating perseverations of her mind suddenly dissipate, precipitating a terrifying lucidity.

 

E: “At least, in the older iteration of automaton.”

 

She suddenly stares at her companion.

 

E: “I’m sorry-”

 

With the application of a nimble swiftness, the engineer brandishes her tools and sets to work unscrewing the front plates of the automaton. Before it can offer protestation, she has acquired access to its internal mechanisms.

-.. ---   -.

The power is switched off, and the screen instantly turns dark.

Scene 23

Fade in.

The automaton awakens alone under the taut canvas draping of the engineer’s tent. Controlled uninterruptedly by the player, it exits beneath the folded flap, and, soon, escapes the confines of their camp, its pace dismal and its movement laborious.

 

The silhouetted outlines of reciprocated entrenchments arise from amidst a dense precipitation of fog settling into the nestled, barren valley. A dissemination of the low-angled rays of the crepuscular sun stains the field and its features in a preternatural hue of amber. The echoes of war encroach with precarious proximity to the edge of a thin brush where the engineer stares plaintively out at the transpiring fray.

 

The player, as the automaton, heads towards the engineer. In response, she turns to greet its advance. The moment it rolls up to her side, however, its single eye socket flashes a deep blue and the automaton continues to move past, ignoring any attempt at input made by the player to reverse these movements.

 

E: “NO! W-WAIT!”

 

With a frenetic, desperate lurch forward, the engineer struggles to procure her electromagnet and catch up to the automatic advance of the automaton. The electromagnet quivering in her tremulous grasp, she forces its weight against the exposed metallic chest escaping towards the brutal altercation and the horizon beyond. The automaton immediately ceases in its mindless venture and addresses her.

 

A: “I    suppose    you    found     your     answer.”

 

 

E: “You knew, didn’t you?”

A: “Yes.”

E: “And you were remotely instructed to withhold all information pertaining to it?”

 A: “I        concede     to         your         vague         statement.”

 

She bows her head in despondent contemplation.

 

E: “We don’t have to let it be. I could permanently sever the remote connection and then we…”

A: “Desertion   is   a   contravention   for    you, an    impossibility     for      me. I     would     not     last.”

E: “I-I know. I wasn’t thinking of deserting.”

E: “Preventing the culmination of your mission, however…”

 

The assuredness of her conviction suddenly wavers and again she is indisposed by the emergence of innumerable considerations, burdensome and debilitating in their simultaneity and contradiction.

She eventually refines the discord in her mind, parsing out the questions of greatest personal significance.

 

E: “Do they anticipate the attainment of finality from this?”

 

A: “Yes.”

 

E: “And the contingency?”

A: “Continued demoralization of soldiers and concentrated civilians until capitulation is coerced.”

 

E: “How long?”

A: “Months, at least.”

 

Broken beneath the palpable weight of the automaton’s words, the engineer steadies her body against the seizing rigidity of her tense, writhing muscles.

 

E: “I shouldn’t be the one to make this choice. I can’t make this choice.”

A: “Pursuing    these     answers     was      not     mandatory.”

E: “It was to me.”

The automaton initiates a transmission.

 

A: “..   ..- -. -.. . ”

 

It truncates the message prior to its completion. After a few seconds of latent silence have passed, it begins anew.

 

A: “We     do     not       have       time       to      deliberate       or      compare    potential        outcomes.”

E: “I know, I... know.”

 

Anxiety stimulates a torrent of amalgamating thoughts, indistinct and blurred, as the engineer fights to quell the raucousness in her mind and attain a moment of lucid, quiet contemplation.

Intaking a shuttering gasp of breath, the engineer closes her eyes and thinks.

 

E: “We have all endured so much for…”

 

Her voice cracks and pidders into silence as she finds herself unable to culminate her own statement. She quenches the rising turbulence stirring within her head and endeavors to begin once again.

 

E: “How can I willingly protract the suffering?”

 

The integrity of the ardent resolve that stiffens her trembling fingers around the electromagnet and maintains the device’s pressure against the hard surface of the automaton slowly weakens.

 

Her muscles grow lax and the magnet wavers in her grasp.

 

A: “Are     you     electing      to       comply       with       your       original      orders?”

 

 

E: “Yes.”

 

 

 

A: “Then    you     are      aware       of       what      must        follow.”

 

Tempered with sudden assuredness, the engineer looks directly upon the single, unlit bulb of the stoic automaton and meekly nods her head.

 

A: “This      final     decision       is        yours        alone.”

E: “What decision still remains?”

 

 

A: “You    do      not      have      to      watch.”

 

Sorrow overtakes her ragged frame, propagating silent tremors and wracking her florid features with stifled sobs.

She shakes her head and looks up at its expressionless face.

 

E: “No, I’ll stay.”

A: “For     the    opportunity    to      obtain         empirical              confirmation?”

 

She nods wearily.

 

E: “And for you.”

 

Through the contortion of lineaments carving the visage of indelible melancholy, a strained smile emerges upon the engineer’s cracking lips. She leans in without hesitation, gathering the rusted, metal plates of the automaton within her arms and resting her head against the operating machinery resonating from behind its enclosed chest cavity.

Surmounting the encumbering reluctance binding her to the automaton’s frame, the engineer separates herself, her eyes reddened and stained with the evidence of irrepressible sorrow.

 

 

She drops the electromagnet and rises.

 

- - .   - - -    - - -   - . .   - . . .   - . - -    .

 

The automaton’s eye glows blue as control is wrested one final time. It passes, stoic and silent, beyond the engineer towards the clamor of cries and gunfire in the distance.

 

The engineer removes her cap as the diminutive automaton disappears amongst the heavy fog, a hazy blur of blue light the sole reminder of its presence.

 

The image fades into darkness, though the faded, murky illumination remains.

 

 

A flash of blue emanates from its center, rattling the screen.

End.

 

PART 4- The Short Story Sequel

History: Operating under the assumption that I’d eventually adapt the nontraditional structure of the interactive story script into a standardized, short-story format, I devised a direct sequel, set two years prior, which predicates the events and outcomes adumbrated in that script. The entirety of the dialogue has been somewhat finalized, however, only the first half is afforded the embellishment of descriptive language and is therefore presented below as a rudimentary draft. The overarching concept I entertained was to create a trilogy of short stories that moved backwards in time with each successive narrative, and, though self-contained with respect to the journey of their respective protagonists, some elements would be tenuously interlaced between stories and provide a semblance of evocative dramatic irony. Despite permanently remaining in its concept phase, the prospective final tale was intended to incorporate a few condensed character arcs and plot threads originally designated for the full-length novel.

Background: The concept was heavily inspired by the hauntingly traumatic effects of radiation discussed with harrowing detail in Kate Moore’s The Radium Girls, in conjunction with the research of Marie and Pierre Curie.

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Chapter 1:

Refracted through an array of panes streaked with an obdurate film of russet-hued dust, patterns of dull morning light are lain across pallid, thin hands which flatten a torn slip of paper between the calloused tips of tremulous fingers. In the temperate gleam diffusing from the nearby window, an outline of faded ink, traced along the rutted creases and fraying edges of the yellowing page, reflects an almost spectral imprint of the message it once conveyed.

17/04/1901

Reminder that conclusions must be formalized and all requested alterations completed by the third of September.

          -Telegraphist Alfred Miller for Macluto Telautomatics

 

The stale breath of a shuttering sigh spills droplets of spittle down patches of coarse, auburn stubble that line the angular chin of a silent gentleman. Dabbing his damp jaw against the pronounced bones of his right shoulder blade, the man drags the note to the edge of his cluttered workspace with the sallow, raw nub of a vacant nail-bed.

Emerging from the shrouded pall of distorted shadows thrown by the crowded recesses of the ramshackle laboratory, the lumbering silhouette of an automaton is gradually cast in the pale light of the rising sun. As the automaton engages in a laborious amble toward its companion, its untarnished treads bow and displace the splintering, rotted wooden floorboards underneath the cumbrous weight of its prodigious cylindrical frame. Stalling and sputtering in its errant trajectory, it clatters with a gentle collision into the uneven legs of the man’s chair.

The sudden momentum of the interaction rattles a pipette the man had placed securely against the peeled, cracking skin stretched across his narrow lips. Its contents are relinquished in spatulate drops that splash against the table and blur the diluted ink of the printed text still resting unfurled amongst a consortium of flasks, solutions, distillates, journals, measurement devices, and other assorted equipment. The man hastens to contain the congealing fluid while the rhythmic syncopation of a single, monotoned note sounds through the metallic reverberation of the automaton’s internal chamber. Attuned to the meaning of the sonorous repetition of steady, distinct clicks, the man passively translates the incoming Morse Code emanating from his companion. Upon its culmination, he carelessly brushes the wiry fingers of his left hand through a dense tangle of brown hair speckled with strands of premature gray before giving the automaton an exculpatory wave with the other.

 

“No matter. I've long since had that date bludgeoned into my memory. A consequence of their gracious generosity.”

The calm affability of his demeanor is punctuated by a strained, conciliatory smile contorting the rigid muscles of his sunken lineaments. A wayward glance meets the unemotive countenance of the automaton and, in the polished surface of its smooth, riveted plates, the man is confronted by an unapologetic reflection of his haggard appearance. Through the dim sheen of his glasses, he regards with tepid interest how the youthful vivaciousness captured in the vivid luster of his green eyes forms a pronounced incongruity with the sagging, hollowed bags which underlie them.

The automaton audibly initiates tapping its reply.

“It seems the term “generous” has a different denotation in your lexicon than it does in mine. It would be quixotic to presume a method of remediation could be devised within the allotted time.”

The man displays an inscrutable expression accompanying a wordless pause. The automaton remains still for a brief instant in a state of contemplation before determining how to properly proceed.

“I sense I was erroneous in interpreting your previous remark as a literal assertion of their munificence.”

“That was in fact sarcasm, yes. Your ability to recognize such venerable linguistic traditions brings me inordinate joy.”

“Adaptability to language patterns is a necessary inclusion to afford clear communication between automata and humans. Otherwise, I would indubitably misunderstand most of your utterances.”

“I truly hope teaching an automaton sarcasm will be regarded as my paramount contribution to science.”

A moment passes, allowing the lingering joviality of his prior remark to dissipate amongst the dry, stagnant air. He begins anew.

“Magnanimous or stringent, it will have to be enough time.”

“Failure is not an impossible prospect.”

A shallow exhalation trembles the corners of the man’s stiffened mouth as it passes beyond his scored lips. He looks askew from the deeply etched lines and lowered brow of his reflected visage, and turns to resume the execution of his task with the vigor of ardent conviction.

“However, it must be, for now, a negligible one.”

 

Chapter 2:

A switch is clicked and the residual blue glow of a desk lamp’s crooked filament slowly wanes and fades as the puissant rays of sunrise break across the horizon. Amidst handling bits of feathering fabric that insulate the wires comprising a piece of circuitry, the man abruptly raises and reaches for a nearby flask. His enfeebled lower limbs quiver in response to this meek exertion before his creaking kneecaps suddenly capitulate, sending his panicked body into a tremor of frenetic convulsions as he lurches towards the stable presence of the automaton. The sturdiness of its cold, hardened frame arrests the man’s inglorious descent and steadies his weakened personage, slumped over and tense from nervous excitation, against itself. Heaving perceptively in this protected position, the man’s chest soon regains normalcy in the rhythms of its breath. He straightens his posture and recollects his balance while still cautiously leaning beside the metal surface. When he separates himself with the meager strength of his left hand, the fragile joints of his forearm protrude grotesquely under the waxen sheathe of his bruised skin.

Resonating beeps representing the unconcerned rationality of the automaton’s laconic remonstrance sound as the man settles back into the prosaic chair he recently abdicated.

“Maintaining deficiencies in sustenance is highly insalubrious.”

“As are most of my propensities, I’ve been so often told.”

“Yet, you have elected to systematically disregard her reasonable exhortations.”

“No, I simply regarded them for long enough to decide not to follow them. A trend that will, unfortunately for her, persist.”

A wry smile in consideration of his apparent deviance precedes the continuation of his sardonic reply.

“Now, if you wish to be complicit in my indiscretions, hand me that distillate.”

The automaton complies with immediacy, situating a glass beaker and its sloshing contents between the plates of its claw-like grip. It places the solution upon the table with all the care and precision offered by the incremental, graduated articulation of motion about its hesitant joints.

“Your circuitous reasoning must be incomprehensible even to those who are familiar with your unique, stylistic manner of speech.”

“My wife would profess the same.”

A single, hoarse laugh escapes from a slanted but congenial smile as the corrugated cracks of his numb fingertips tenderly press against the clouded surface of the glass. While transfixed in silent rumination, a chill of solemnity stifles the warmth of his temper and supplants his irreverent countenance with a wistful, distant expression.

“Thank you.”

“I can do naught but oblige.”

 

Chapter 3:

Quiet austerity is evinced from within the warped, heavy walls lining the cluttered laboratory as the man persists in his nimble endeavors. Punctuating the stillness and settling torpor of a collecting layer of dust with its low vibrations, the automaton emits an encoded intercession.

“I have discerned observationally that you harbor a concentrated sample on your personage with unwavering constancy.”

“How wonderfully perceptive of you to notice a behavior I hadn’t attempted to conceal.”

“Impertinent interjection aside, Oberinium’s status renders such additional security measures superfluous.”

“Security? No.”

Knocking the curved hook of a reposed cane aside with a curt, dismissive brush against the elevated veins reticulating the back of his left hand, he reaches into the slack pocket of his pleated trousers. A vial of crystalline salts is lifted from the tattered folds with methodical attentiveness and delicacy.

“The glow is ineffably mesmerizing, isn’t it?”

Lurid in the soft turbidity shading the corners and knotted rafters of the laboratory, a thin band of ethereal green light emanates in a continuous stream from within the narrow tube. The luminescence stains the drab appearance of the man’s loose-fitting raiment and seeps into the exposed layers of his flaking, scarred flesh, imbuing his wan complexion with a hue of preternatural intensity. His gaze reciprocates the fervidity emitted from the glass as his mind perambulates in a sinuous, rapid trail.

“This stunning radiance is partially attributable to the impermanence of its current state. And I don’t mean to merely speak philosophically on the transience of beauty, the effulgence is quite literally caused by the release of energy as the Oberinium transmutes over time.”

“As visually scintillating as this demonstrated phenomena might be, the dissipation of energy still denotes an insuperable degradation of the necessary element.”

“Irrevocable, perhaps, however, we can contend with this decay in other ways. “

He orients himself away from the unblinking bulbs bored into the domed, metal skull of the automaton and indicates with a slight tilt of his head towards his unfinished task.

“The inclusion of lead, for instance, shields sensitive components in the circuitry from its damaging influence.”

“That is simply a trivial alleviation inefficacious in allaying the underlying issue you professed would be fixable within the narrow time frame allotted.”

The man answers this blunt declaration with a wave of his hand, lethargic and slow, as if the dense air dragged against his somnolent gesture and resisted its gentle motion.

The playful cadence of his response is articulated through the soft, crackling tones of his weak voice.

“Your confidence in me is inspiring. I haven’t exhausted all my ideas just yet.”

 

Chapter 4:

Intensified through the faceted prism of paned window glass, the blended hues of a crepuscular sky graze a pair of twitching, tired lids held tightly closed in protestation of the penetrating glare. Blinking away the encrusted evidence of his stupor, the man peers about the few regions of the laboratory still lighted against the encroaching darkness of the advancing night, his countenance vacant, empty, and reflective of the somnambulant state of his groggy mind. The sharp, extruded shapes of rigid shadows slowly soften as they intermingle and blur together, spreading across slouching depressions and dripping like poured oil into the arterial grooves crossing the floorboards. The viscous blackness pools beside a ragged toy lying discarded at the base of the automaton’s treads.

A flint of incendiary realization is struck amidst the misty haze of the man’s murky thoughts, and he drops to his fracturing kneecaps in a desperate clamber towards the tiny, carved toy before cradling the object with the tenuity of his shaking arms.

His sudden inquiry, plaintive and pleading in its tenor, escapes the chafed aridity of his throat in a broken, discordant vibrato.

“How long was she here? What did she touch? Did she put anything near her face or mouth?”

Florid discoloration tinges the taut, leaden skin overstretching his concave cheeks. Through the filter of his ashen complexion, the blush of anxious vitality stains his lineaments a ghastly purple hue.

“I was able to ensure that no such situation arose. Sadie’s attentions appeared to be dominated by an uncompromising desire to remain in your propinquity. It is surprising you were not ousted from your slumber by her vociferous protestations as I escorted her out.”

The steady constancy of the automaton’s reverberant knell mollifies the incipient fit wracking the frail frame kneeling limply at its front. Rising with strenuous efforts and dragging himself back towards his chair in a disoriented hobble, the man tenderly situates the toy at the corner of his worktable. His eyes, limpid and red from the strain of residual fatigue, look askance in a pitiable avoidance of the automaton’s imperturbable gaze.

“It’s better for her this way. I appreciate your gesture.”

“You are aware there is exclusivity to the cognizance of Oberinium’s existence, confined to the preeminent- “

“She’s my daughter. Additionally, she’s four.”

“Your government did not specify a minimum age to which this stipulation applies. I must ensure that you at least have attributed any distinguishable properties she potentially witnessed to Ionium, as per regulations.”

“…Yes, I did.”

“The delay in your response does not betray certitude. Your government implored secrecy- “

“No, I implored. The request regarding Oberinium was mine.”

His voice, measured and flat, grows flustered as a flush of remembered ignominy stains the inward curve of his cheeks and quickens the pace of his careful, metered cadence.

“It is doubtful you had the puissance necessary to influence the adoption of this immutable policy. As for the content of your original proposition, am I to assume it suggested the interminable suppression of scientific information?”

“Well, no… I never wanted…”

A stunted sigh elicits a low, sibilant whistle as it breezes through the spaces formed from intermittent patterns of crowded and missing teeth. Following a noiseless pause, the man reconstitutes his disjointed thoughts and speaks again.

“Every time a new element is introduced to the public, avaricious sots start selling tinctures of the stuff alongside unsupported claims of its salubriousness. It was imperative to me to prevent the same from befalling Oberinium, so, I proposed the consideration of stringent regulations to moderate its sale and employment.”

“A reasonable pursuit. However, the government’s subsequent response represents a profound extrapolation of your intentions. Clearly, they were not incentivized by your injunctions alone.”

A meek, mournful smile gently curls and recedes his lacerated lips.

“I suppose that’s true, in part. However, some blame must still reside with me.”

 

Chapter 5:

Beyond the meager confines of the isolated laboratory, bent, sporadic trees and forlorn blades of wild grass span the veld extending inexorably towards the elusive horizon. Particles of the copper plains, drifting in the lassitude of a dying wind, coat the gnarled foliage and eroded stones that rise like austere graves from the sifting ground. The researcher positions himself within the gleam of the earthen tones filtering through the window, the perceptible cant in his imbalanced posture steadied against his quivering cane. He adjusts the tilt in the rectangular spectacle frames slipping down the bridge of his nose and engages in a perfunctory perusal of an officially notarized telegram he recently unfolded.

“I understand the paucity means they must be “particular” about its distribution, however, I- erroneously, quite apparently- figured they could afford to spare me a few additional milligrams.”

As he utters this acerbic condemnation, his creaking fingers tear at the telegram in a vehement staccato of shrill rips.

Rising above the shriek of the shorn message, a single, sustained note elevates in pitch and volume, echoing between the crags and valleys receding into the distance as it follows along the track of an advancing train. A hushed interjection falls breathlessly from the man’s twitching mouth as the blaring noise diminishes in a sudden, precipitous decrescendo dissipating into the russet haze.

“That damned train passes every morning from the mines, I suppose it must be laden with the prodigious weight of “possibility”.

“Ionium ore, predominantly.”

Encumbered with renascent uncertainty concerning the wavering stability of his cane, the man shuffles away cautiously from the window and lowers himself in a gradual, somber descent into his chair. An area is cleared amidst the haphazard arrangement of equipment strewn about his workspace as he rifles through the debris for a clean piece of parchment unblemished by sodden and discolored contamination. He clenches a pen between the shriveled flesh clinging to the porous bones and inflexible joints of his tremulous fingers and begins to transcribe his response.

The sharp point of the pen is carved along the delicate surface of the blank sheet, marring it with a splattered, drawn trail of bleeding ink.

Whispering an acrimonious denouncement of the illegibility of his capricious penmanship, he tosses the implement aside with frustrated resignation.

“Ah, well, I’m sure they’ll appreciate not having to read my handwriting anymore.”

Concurrent with the exhalation of a disgruntled snort, the man cinches the cuffed sleeves of his splotched, weathered shirt above the withering knobs of his distended elbows. A succession of snaps sounds as he unfurls the hunched curvature of his bent spine and solidifies his stiffened body into a reposed position resting against the back of his chair. He interlocks his thin extremities behind his head and entwines them amongst slick strands of gray-streaked hair before addressing his companion in a tone of feigned placidity.

“Are you amenable to typing up an oration of mine?”

“Proceed.”

Reclining while his weary lids contest the descending force of gravity, he recites a sarcastic panegyric dedicated to his superiors and the notable lenity of their constant, unequivocal rejections. The automaton, taciturn and unprovoked by the man’s histrionic implementation of language, hesitates before tapping out its typed transcription.

“Shall I redact the extraneous wordplay?”

“They’re known in the common parlance as ‘puns’, and no, you may not.”

The man persists unperturbed in the articulation of his forced supplication, and, succeeding its conclusion, unshackles himself from the dominating regime of contentious somnolence which had violently set upon his relaxed, defenseless frame.

Stricken with a spasmodic wince as he hoists himself out of his slouching posture, he stammers motionless for a moment before grabbing at a flat metal instrument intended to remove the embedded bolts embossing the automaton’s anterior. He opens the newly liberated cavity and pries the completed message from the prongs of an inset typewriter, a knowing smirk pulling and stretching the upturned edges of his chapped mouth as he reads through the tangible evidence of his dry wit.

 “Perfect.”

Placing the flippant reply aside, the man allows his fumbling fingers to commingle with errant wires and abandoned circuitry as his eyes affix their idle and aimless gaze upon these mechanical motions. His left hand gravitates towards the slouching pocket of his sagging trousers and caresses the concealed vial of Oberinium dilutions huddled against a charred, spreading hole chewed into the drab cloth.

Breaching through the severed and singed fibers, the smooth surface of the glass tube brushes lightly against the deadened nerves and raised contusions rippling the naked flesh of his blistered palm.

Precipitated from the fog of desultory introspection, a lone consideration hails.

“I’ve been entertaining the prospect of isolating and replacing the Oberinium components as a method of redressing this encountered wear.”

Stunned by the seeming simplicity of his own succinct proposition, the man allows his desperate mind to be enthralled by the ebullient images conjured from his quixotic cogitations.

The automaton interrupts these unarticulated musings with the clangor of its innocuous query.

“The foundational concept is theoretically feasible, though demanding and precise in execution. Do you propose an empirical test on an independent system to ascertain the practical validity of your supposition?”

Shaking his head knowingly at his own optimistic disregard for the stringent actualities and limiting stipulations concomitant with his proposal, the man represses the compulsive twinges of mounting nervous agitation. With his attention hastily turned to a careful inspection of the automaton, he unfurls the wrinkled cuff of his right sleeve and gathers its loose, drooping folds within his feeble grasp, wiping a splotch of grease from atop the curved plate of the automaton’s head with its rough, yellowing fabric.

“A-Ah, yes. Of course.”

Though a shy smile accompanies the reassuring softness of his whispered words, his eyes glint from beneath the sheer crests of fluttering, purple lids with the ferocity of undampened eagerness and apprehension.

 

Chapter 6:

Interlaced threads of red, throbbing veins ensnare and lattice the refulgent green eyes that bulge from within their dark, craterous sockets. Through the glassy veneer of his fatigued and distorted vision, the man’s sullen surroundings are painted in a smattering of indistinct impressions mixing into the diluted light spilling from the overcast sky. He wipes his eyes and smudged spectacle lenses, restoring an uncompromising lucidity to the harsh angles of his prosaic reality. Resting the collapsed flap of skin fused to the tip of his thumb against the bristling hairs of his auburn beard, he surveys the completed Oberinium-impregnated circuit functioning flawlessly before him.

“The exigencies of difficult situations justify somewhat hastened experimental proceedings, wouldn’t you say?”

“No. That is demonstrably a poor standard of scientific methodology to uphold.”

“Normally, I would agree, but… We don’t have the time.”

Tethered into despondency by the certitude of his words, the man’s speech falters and tapers into silence. With pronounced reservation, he dislodges his cadaverous tongue from the pungent recess of its shallow resting place and reanimates his stagnant, languishing thought.

“I need to determine if the recorded effectiveness of my replacement method is translatable to more complicated, interconnected scenarios.”

“This intricate Oberinium circuitry you are referring to is—"

“Yours, yes.”

A veil of cold assuredness coats the temperate whisper of his calm cadence. The crimson tint of his strained, narrowed glare meets the unchanged countenance of his unemotive companion as the clang of Morse Code blusters into the stillness with a sharp and penetrating ring.

“I must intercede, the lack of practicality of this venture is insurmountable; the dexterity and delicacy required are beyond your capabilities and the probability of incurring irrevocable damage to my functions is exceptional. I cannot recommend on the basis of a risk-benefit analysis—"

“You are a sapient being, I am not going to concede to allowing the truncation of your life without at least attempting to eradicate the cause--”

The vibratory shiver of his words’ struck chord is stifled as the final, choked syllables are swallowed into the soundless sepulcher of his hoarse throat. A croaking cough trembles the breadth of his stature before a breathless plea clears his raw windpipe and escapes his peeling lips.

“It is incontrovertible that a chance of success exists, I can’t simply ignore that.”

“A likelihood that is statistically negligible. Preventative measures have failed.”

“If they could just supply more time…”

“Ultimately, the decay is responsible for foisting this rigid time frame upon us.”

The weakened tendons of the man’s muscles tense with every jolting crash of iron armature from within the hollow chamber of the automaton’s pulsating chest.

“The orders of your government were entirely pragmatic in their consideration of this ineluctable matter. They provided an opportunity for you to pursue your hypotheses, however, given the lack of efficacy elicited, the expected recourse would be to finally comply with their intentions.”

“They don’t care about the preservation of your life, nor do they respect your agency to decide this fate for yourself.”

Steeled beneath a hardened façade of solemn restraint, his brittle composure begins to fracture against the mounting exasperation of his spewed, bitter admonishment.

“You are cognizant that I have no personal desires. Therefore, I assent to the prudent machinations designated for the final months of my operational life. Establishing mobile telegraphy is a beneficial- “

“You can’t…”

“I reiterate, no judicious alternatives remain. Additionally, if there was veracity to your professed devotion to upholding the sanctity of my purported autonomy, your acquiescence should have been immediately pursuant to my initial objections.”

“That’s…”

His cracking mask of frigid resolution, tempered in the presumed righteousness of his stance, is further defaced by the blunt fustigation wielded by the automaton. He reels for a brief instant to collect his shattering mentality and weld his fragmented thoughts into a cobbled facsimile of the untarnished conviction he previously donned.

He peers with frantic suddenness at the automaton and faces, exposed in the undistorted scrutiny of its polished glass bulbs, his aged and wearied reflection wearing a frightened expression of irrepressible sorrow.

“I’m sorry. I won’t watch you rot.”

“I will not prevent you from trying.”

A resounding clatter answers the quiet wake of the last Morse chime as the man reaches, with desperate impulsivity, for his tools, knocking into the circuitry before him and pitching the morass of wires and components off the worktable, their faint, internal glow abruptly extinguished as they bash against the wooden planks below. The scattered metal writhes in pieces upon the floor, a piercing wail rising from their energetic undulations until the stiffness of rigor settles in and the plaintive whine slowly enervates and dies away.

The man clutches his implements and leans towards the automaton, undeterred by the broken circuitry lying motionless and silent at his feet.